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Old 12-19-05, 01:09 AM   #16
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Well,Welll,Well....

1...my name was given to me when i was 7...i took a trip to cali to see my fam and they called me memphis so i ran with it...lets see...bleek had only one track back then and that was with jay-z on commin of age and i didnt listen to rap back then so fuck off with that shit homie

2...really..tha song was ass...if ya didnt know there is much more to a "Good Track" than mediocre lyrics...and if a nigga got trash quality on his shit...who gone listen to it? his friends...thas it..nobody gone pay for somethin that sounds like crap...and shit...his quality aint all on his equipment...i mean damn...if a nigga literally tryin to eat tha mic up...its gonna sound like garbage...and if tha other nigga too scared to get close to tha mic...its gonna sound like garbage...simple as that

3...you obvisiouly wanted feedback and i gave my opinion...dont be mad cuz i didnt ride ya nuts like Hoodz did and say.."Oh HELL YEA THAT SHIT WAS DOPE....YOU GONE GET SIGNED OFFA THAT SHIT RIGHT THERE NIGGA!!!"...cuz i dont lie...i call it how i see it...take it..or leave it..but dont bitch about it

4...lol...im dope as fuck faggot



^....no....your not...you = ass...go e-bang some nigga lmfao...your trash....i would murder if i actually wasted time to e-battle homo faggots like you...AND....you look like you 20 but sound like a fuckin 15 year old wtf is that shit?...fuckin inbreeding =/ fake ass SPuL lookin mufucka

*edit* oh yeah...your lyrics aren't even mediocre...they're below basic...fuck outta here go to some other forum where they tolerate faggot niggas who bite names off mainstream artists...my brother useta call himself young city...then chopper came out...so he changed his name...like you should too homo
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Old 12-19-05, 01:18 AM   #17
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memphis you fake fuck.

Your generic with quality on the net. Im creative making moves in my local industry.

how the fuck you gone sit there thinking i put a fun track i made while learning to self produce my own music, with my gear that will never justify the way I rap and you think im on the net to try and get signed -_-
you gone sit there and tell me your tryna get signed thru the net? you sit there telling me your track you posted is you making an attempt to get signed?
i spose you fit right in with the mainstream right now, cause in your tracks your saying everything thats been said before.

Your arguing over someones quality, a unfixable thing! mother fucker, who said I put this track on the net so anyone would bomp and fucking download!

immortal tecnique was a net head and no one on the net played his shit!

shut the fuck up you net beefing herb. Your wack AND you have good quality. I stay humble with my bad quality.

Whoever is letting you use there gear to record needs to check themself, cause fuck wasting time on a kid who spits whats been said before.

My lyrics>yours!

My career prospects> yours

My menatlity towards songs on the net >yours.

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Old 12-19-05, 05:02 AM   #18
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werd i love beef in my music thread's!!!!

GOOOOOOOO TEAMMMMMMMMM!
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Old 12-19-05, 02:51 PM   #19
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listenin..beat is koo..first dude quality sucks...voice is koo..but u gotta keep it on the mic..and not swayin away from it..try compressin it..lyrics are kooo, flow is off alot..it has a pattern but its the wrong pattern..work on the breath a lil too..flow gets better....lol at the gurl on the hook i can tell its her first time..mad knizzle comes on flows better...energetic now..lyrics are good..gotta get a pop filter..quality sucks unfortunately...this is better fo u..but i dont like the pops..man that hooks hurtin me lol...
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