typing as I listen....ok flow is koo..but ya pronounication is lacking...ya cadence is reason I see u really gasping for air an cutting off the ending of words to get a breathe..beat is nasty..good choice....an this singer dude is ill..ya delivery was nice an laid back...u ahd the general idea of how to use ya voice on this jus need to do it in a more polished manner....once again ya breathe control hurt u....it prevented u from really animated ya voice....or changed ya flow up significantly....but u def elevating playa..def a good listen..keep it up man

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thanks alot....i rlly apreciate all da feed

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Stop ruining dope songs with these wack remixes. Please.

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Man why are you even beefin with me?...you jus drop free posts in my threads?...I aint even done anythin to you...if you got a prolem pm me

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Listening: Beat is sick
Sicking pure dope
Inter your flow is nice but in pasts u loss ya breath.Delivery is nice and your emotion is aiight dawg. Lyrics is good dawg. But the singing shines on this track dawg

nice track. 7.5/10

apreciate the feed..hes a mainstream singer so course itll outshine

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aight...........

Flows dope

Your Deliverys niceo n this one,feelin it

Lyrics are koo suit the track well

THAT SINGER IS DOPE AS FUCK I SWEAR

Presence Is Nice

beats Koo..im not feelin it that much

but yeah good track homie


8/10
Keep up

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thanks.............

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