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Old 12-22-05, 08:41 PM   #1
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Rev Just Quit Now...leave While Yer Ahead.......
Cause Nor Me Or Daubs Feelin A Werd U Just Said.....
I Come Wit Heat......so Imm Inceneratin This Dude Quik......
Id Son U In Audio Or Text U Pick It U Prick.........
Talk Bout Albums Fallin Off Shelfs..yers Is Collectin Dust......
Shit Yer Styles So Streatced Tha Micz Startin Ta Rust........
Imma Hand It Bakk To Daubs U Aint Even Competition......
Want Ta Get Better Go To My Soundclick And Listen/......
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Old 12-22-05, 08:42 PM   #2
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Daubs is like a bat, he never rises to see the morning,
Cuz even Past Tense said that your text is boring.
Tryin to hide ya lack of skill behind an animation light,
He could have brass knuckles and still lose the fight.
I just throw ish out there like a paintbrush that daubs,
His lyrics make you cringe like a AID's person that sobs?
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Old 12-22-05, 08:48 PM   #3
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riding for the win, well watch as I leave his bike buckled
plus playing sonic is the only time your using knuckles
your a wack couple, both past tense and the rev
both been postin for 20 mins..
..and aint come close to the best
you know what im sayin, your shit doesnt phase me
so rev can go back to bible bashin..
..so he can rightfully prays me
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Old 12-22-05, 08:44 PM   #4
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Ugly ass, you couldnt pull a chick in a fuckin brothel
you only get noticed when composes with models
faggot G,you aint shit..claim your a bad boy in school
but this is the internet...and your STILL following rules
you'll never be cool...not even in the winter, played queer
cant even see christmas, cause your scared of the reign,deer
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Old 12-22-05, 08:48 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by NON-FIXION
Rev Just Quit Now...leave While Yer Ahead.......
Cause Nor Me Or Daubs Feelin A Werd U Just Said.....
I Come Wit Heat......so Imm Inceneratin This Dude Quik......
Id Son U In Audio Or Text U Pick It U Prick.........
Talk Bout Albums Fallin Off Shelfs..yers Is Collectin Dust......
Shit Yer Styles So Streatced Tha Micz Startin Ta Rust........
Imma Hand It Bakk To Daubs U Aint Even Competition......
Want Ta Get Better Go To My Soundclick And Listen/......


Nah I'll pass on your SC, tryin to be crunk is stupid listenin,
But I can tell your a krab, and that is non fiction.
You have no creativity, I mean you can't even think of your name,
You ain't too crunk, you just bite cuz you and others sound the same.
Go back to ya home and maybe the red cross will show ya compassion,
Nothin to fear about this kids style, and I ain't talking bout fashion.
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Old 12-22-05, 08:53 PM   #6
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spit a quik couple of barz......now imma tackle it.......
com on revs diein give fatty sum chocolate....
throw em a bar or sumthing......b4 he goes into withdrawlz......
u know revs bitch....cause this kidz playin with dollz........
i gotta question? yuv been rappin fer ever yet still no skill....
and no i couldnt live yer life.....THERE SUM HUGE PANTS TO FILL
ill dice this dude faster...then him eatin a mcdeal at his best......
i didnt even have to spit this kid went into cardiac arest
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Old 12-22-05, 08:58 PM   #7
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I've been rapping for 3 weeks....
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Old 12-22-05, 08:59 PM   #8
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I've been rapping for 3 weeks....

i've been rappin for 3 days
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Old 12-22-05, 09:06 PM   #9
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I've been rapping for 3 weeks....


wow for real, i never expected that, but if thats what he says
but after reading your verses, it seems more like 3 days
responding to my diss, well you fell in my curse
and past your not a battler?...i can tell by your verse
you know what im sayin, even my weak shit owns you
and throwin ya verse to a fan is the only time you get blown dude
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Old 12-22-05, 09:13 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by Daubs
wow for real, i never expected that, but if thats what he says
but after reading your verses, it seems more like 3 days
responding to my diss, well you fell in my curse
and past your not a battler?...i can tell by your verse
you know what im sayin, even my weak shit owns you
and throwin ya verse to a fan is the only time you get blown dude


Daubs? what the fucks the name mean? dude seriously u jealous
You were all over my nuts and u know what i can still tell it
Cuz I said one thins wasn't even concerning you u fake fuck
So do one thing for me hope of ya boi j'z nuts
Truth is rv's a 3rd grade quiz and this bitch couldn't even pass it
and i'm sure we all agree,ur text sux......
.........and so does ur graphics
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Old 12-22-05, 09:01 PM   #11
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rev uve been doin text for ever and audio ive only been recording for two weeks so suck it up
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Old 12-22-05, 09:01 PM   #12
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rev uve been doin text for ever and audio ive only been recording for two weeks so suck it up

nah u should set it up with me that'd be more fair..cuz i'd own u harder....

oo yeah whats ur soundclick link?
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Old 12-22-05, 09:16 PM   #13
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wheres yer soundclick fagot??????????/
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Old 12-22-05, 09:17 PM   #14
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wheres yer soundclick fagot??????????/

dont worry about my soundclick..i wanna make sure i'm not wasting my time
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Old 12-22-05, 09:18 PM   #15
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dont rip my gfx or text im better..you blaggin you twat
how can ya call my gfx with something as graphic as that^
anorexic, na mate the total opposite, you nearly dead
the only thing thats fatter than your bellys your head
you got a mop too, thats cool, you can be quick like sonic
& at least you can clean the floor before i drop you on it
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