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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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This was feedback posted for Terumoto
IP: F1FC 4749
checkin pollllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzz
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To The Ground...
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
IP: B883 0CC4
Rofl, i didnt even know this was up. Checking polls.
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yeah man, neither did i
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IP: EB37 FE1E
Voted For: Terumoto
everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows nope i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital okay and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it okay i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection decent i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin' see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him okay just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live decent dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit okay its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro nope Eh.. your verse was aight. Didn’t see any hard punches there.. only had a couple of decent punches, def. not your best. Structure was straight.. and the flow was coo. But them punches could’ve came a little harder though. Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all, Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw. Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score this kinda threw me off a lil.. but it was decent Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe. cool Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste.. i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes okay but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically, Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery decent Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n' we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman... okay Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.." nope shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope.. ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat ..ew Eh.. your verse was aight too. Threw in there a couple of jokes that make you go "ew" n' shit. Punches were there.. couple were decent and had a one punch that was hard. structure was straight and the flow was coo. Your bar with the.. all, before, saw, score.. kinda threw me off till I got it. Overall – One M.B. took this shit though. Even though both verses were coo and I know both of you didn’t try, One M.B. seemed to edge this one out a little bit. Just came with punches that were a little harder and connected though. Maybe a couple of personas in each verse, but M.B. took this one.. no hate though.
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...Lmao, oh and you had the multies in there n' shit.
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IP: 676B 9D48
Voted For: Terumoto
alright...OMB takes the cake here............drakel...the first half of your verse was dope...and than it seemed to kinda fall off into forced punches and shit....your wordplay was cool, the personals were good....but all in all.....omb's best was as good as your best, if not better, not to mention..OMB's verse was solid all the way tyhrough....good shit though...i enjoyed both verses.
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
i like how my 2nd bar is so true
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IP: 676B 9D48
i hope your not implying i'm riding his dick....because i ride no ones dick....
and either your just that ignorant....or your in denial.....because his verse was flat out better...multis? yes...rhyme scheme? yes...punches? yes...personals...you definately had more, but half of them weren't saying anything you didn't already say, and none of them connected that hard...besides..his verse was just more clever than yours....deal with the shit
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Seek & Destroy We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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10:23 till i'm 86
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
IP: F67E 3D56
everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital vs. Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste.. i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically, Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery T- your shit was so corny i was lookin for a cob in your verse, but u had two good bars but the anus one eventhough it was decent and original it was corny with the whole anus thing. the other vague line was str8 D- i think your first line u used before, but good agian. and your other one i guess i haven't heard the dr thing that way but it was pretty simple, the rest of your lines i thought were not good, but i liked that sherlock holmes set up was clever -word
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: F67E 3D56
by the way its funn your losing to that wack ass verse haha
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: F67E 3D56
oh, and if my face was that ugly i'd cover it up too
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
thanks man, its no wonder then i havn't seen a pic of you posted yet
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...i'm da nicest...
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
IP: E86E 4D14
Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all,
Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before genius at all/seen it before.....u might be able to pull that off in an audio if u have an accent,but it doesnt rhyme n in text u gonna really make sure u rhyme.... the punch is ....ok at best...pretty played concept Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw. Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score was in saw /even the score doesnt rhyme AT ALL...PUNCH....EHH DOESNT HIT HARD Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe. PLAYED CONCEPT,N WACK Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste.. i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes HAHA i like that one.... but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically, Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery WACK Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n' we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman... ehh....pretty weak Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.." GAYYYYYYYYYYYYY shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope.. ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat ...SUCKS everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows EHH NOT FEELIN IT i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital HAHA I LIKE THAT ONE and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it WEAK..n doesnt rhyme i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection WEAK i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin' see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him WEAK just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live suckS ..i see where u are goin with it but u just worded it all wrong dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit i guess there's wordplay there but its weak n i'm not feelin it its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro .......dont like it at all ...basically,u each had one punch i likes....u both had trouble rhymin i'm seein played and weak punches from both not gonna vote just feedback i'd say its pretty even
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 0B90 96F9
^You're right about that audio shit... its all multiple syllable rhymes and it all rhymes well... I guess youd have to hear my accent to get it.
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This was feedback posted for Drakel
IP: FEDD 5A6B
everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows aiight opener,not really direct,wored pretty off. i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital pretty decent and your audios lost, kid....more than blind orphans but itune you out anyways, after i click and abort it good i hit the mark everytime, your shots miss every direction like, you're offline so much, i lost my net connection played i'll pull away with this fast, win without noticin' see my rhymes are like nos...yours just get rode by him lol.pretty good just face it, im better, im amazing with this shit you're so down under me, i wont even count where you live Badly worded,plus it wasnt hitting hard..meh. dont get khaki, im wearing you down man, straight sockin' ya bitch yo, i wouldn't in-vest in your rhymes, if it was a perfect fit Nice its no mystery, i point my gat at you, its a sherlock, holmes so i'm cappin' your top more than the one in your sig, bro 1st line was nice=set up.But 2nd meh... vs. Sorry man, Its obvious you're not a genius at all, Him beat me? Its like drake's penis, no-one's seen it before WTF?..why would we want to?. Im keepin it raw, so brutal you'd think the scene was in saw. Beat me three times and it still wouldnt even the score no..sorta statement-ish..naw. Squeezin ya balls, Drakel be hittin the high notes You're like a veteran hooker, you'll never be tight, hoe. so ole skool sounding..Im not feelin this. Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste.. i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes lol.good but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically, Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery hee,hee..pretty good. Ya wordplay is more farfetched than anything i've seen written n' we couldnt catch ya lines if we were all professional fisherman... aiight seen the concept waay to many times Work on spittin ya bars, instead of droppin the soap If I was you i'd be like "Whoa, God i'm a joke.." shit, whip out the rubber jocks and the rope.. ya cant spit a verse with my fuckin cock in ya throat ??? overall/-decent battle..Drakel had wittier punches..Terumoto ur punches seem so bland an not even containing any creativity..so Drakel gets my vote. V/-Drakel. But I dont have enough post..so..FEED BACK.
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