nice wordplay man dope shit.

come on people...more real feed

^^^amen to Alpha....lol

newayz thanx fo da feed u guys..............uppin dis n no doubt ill RTF.....1

come on people keep the feed flowin or die of a cancerous plague

*pushes alpha out of the way*

Don't worry C, I run this shit. I'll get you real feed. Cause I'm a man

i liked this, although i think it coulda been more effective without the vulgar profanity, but whatever, it was nice, some lines seemed outta place though, good multies, which made it flow nice, although i think some vocab was forced, even though it was fitting, it still abrupted the flow....so, handle your words a little better, come more concise, and you should be fine, keep up

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^ Told you C... you can count on me.

lol thanx indeph n alpha much luv to both yall *muah*

thanx fo da feed drakel

uppin dis...........

maybe we can share lil c

well just maybe; hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm thinks i can b sharedlol

lol fo real u should dump ur man buy a airplane ticket and come hook up wit this playa....u know i got those real hard abs and shit

yo holla at me sometime u never online im me on aim "mc slayor"....i'll be waiting

Well This Is What I Was Telling The Moderaters See This Right Here Is Poety Not An Open Mic Unless We're Talking Coffee Shop Poetry

But This Is Good Poetry Keep Up The Good Work

^^^is 2 open mic

lol prozak DOWN BOY DOWN!!! lol....i know i aint neva online cuz of my lil boy....oh n btw READ da member mugshots I AINT w/ my man no more we doneyea ill try n get on AIM tonite iight?

uppin dis.....1

haha bitches i got the phone number to the sexiest most beatiful thing breathing

whoa im the loser on here so 2 say by indeph and alpha yet they both hittin on a chick over the net...lol..indeph ur not amn u jus wish u were cuz ur lesbo and alpha if u such a pimp get a girl around you unlessthey dont show interest in you...sorry had 2 let it out muthafuckas always poppin shit 2 me so when i see sumtin left open im take it and run wit it and have fun wit it...

n e ways back 2 the feed good girl i feel you on all aspects i hate bush he fucking daddy's boy lil bitch who wanna do nuttin in office except start pointless wars with everyone cuz he feels he gotta control the world 2 impress his pops...i can say dat cuz im prior service so i know how fucked up the government is first hand...peep my new shit in here on om called new shit...couldnt think of a name but it talks about rv's hataz,dick ridaz and how too many members sleep on each others shit feel me?

*raises hands 2 alpha and indeph and says "do u hate me cuz im white?"

btw im the "essay" writer so 2 say since no seems 2 fathom my writing's whether it b song or topic but dont let these fools fool u or foil ur goodness they hataz thats why they dont like me!

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