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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
~stylez~ | 1 | 16.67% | |
Mimesis. | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-29-06, 12:35 AM | #16 | |
Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Mimesis.
mimesis owns and shit, and he should join the chain gang. v/mim |
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01-29-06, 03:46 PM | #17 | |
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Uhh.. cool.
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01-29-06, 04:39 PM | #18 |
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This was feedback posted for Mimesis.
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zzzzzzzzzzzz...........YO YO I GOT MAD BORED READING THAT
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01-29-06, 07:39 PM | #19 | |
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^ Shut the fuck up.
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01-30-06, 04:21 PM | #20 |
Above Originality
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uppin this homes............................................. ..........
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01-30-06, 04:33 PM | #21 | |
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Yeah, upping your cheese sandwhiches too!
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01-30-06, 05:46 PM | #22 |
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and for your grilled stuff burrito.................................TOO!
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01-31-06, 03:01 PM | #23 | |
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Voted For: Mimesis.
Ok.... Mimesis - Son, you ain't on my fucking level.. I'll easily leave ya face curled ......And have this Lezbo more then some confused teenage girls - Nice nameplay, decent opener No chance... I see your sig.. now you know I'm kicking this right Cause we do know you.........as the worst fucking kid on the site - Ok... I'm rippin this dyke.. and your alias is nothin but a damn hoe now I don't need the other half of your name to leave this Sho, down - Good nameplay again...nice Oh, wow.. you tried out for my squad.. then I left you crying, son So I'll just tell you to STFU.. like the fuckin crew I denied you from - Lol, funny shit...good personal if true You ain't winning.. we know its true.. kid, I'll leave ya bloody son I'll keep you low, Down.. even by beating you in front of everyone - Not workin... Could this be any easier?.. Haha, nah.. I'ma come tearing ya, jerk The only time you're rapping, Ty.. is when you're preparin for work - Lol, pretty good Cause you're a fucking queer.. and now its over.. that's whats up I don't got mud on my shoes.. but I'll still leave this Tyle fucked up - Haha, nice finisher Overall, this was a strong verse...filled with personals and good wordplay/nameplay and was witty at the same time....attacked the opponent directly, and each punch was worded well - Flow and rhyming were very good too... ~stylez~ - I'ma drop this quick and simple like sledgehammers damagin' your temple. That fan of bandanas, Stylez, is slammin' with or without instrumentals. - Weak opener - attack the opponent ... I'm never gentle.... The rough side of the velcro strip. Stickin' to a rhythm in ways these emcees can't rock for shit. - WTF...where exactly are you dissing him? this is RAPVERSE homes, not make ya self look weak. if that was ya all, shyt sit in da rooks seat, chicken scratch, ya penmanships not neat. - No..... TEST THIS.. i dare you, if u lookin to catch wreck.. ......better bring a life vest and flares with em!! ill spit till i see a combination of Thailand and southamerica's drowning victims!! - WHAT THE FUCK u Cut up kAts?wutchu philipinO, shyt ImA put u in da Past way Bak wen Fat Joe hung wit Big PUN, madE rap LatINO GaMMblin wit meeh, ya neVa win.....But its a Sin to do That shyT wen ya catholic Hustlin in uh CaSino - Hell NO hahah okai, anotha T.O, ya DisGracin da Game, easy K.O cuz da EgO bein da saME Rearrange Ya fRAme, cuz U SPECIAL, is yA whOle sTyle Crazy or MenTal - Fucking boring im ya SoN?lisTen Here G-SoN, ya CouLDnt sPit SmoKe wita maDe Up weeD GuN BoRin meeh, like DBZ reruns, go GeT suM BEBE?ya lines is pUSSY, SignS ya lineS saYin u NEED SuM - Bad finisher Ok...where to start? You do realise this is a battle....you need to DISS your opponent, most of your verse revolved around yourself...that is NOT what battles are for - You need punchlines in there, be creative and use personals to diss whoever you are facing...you did none of that - Aside from that, your verse had a horrible structure, no flow, poor rhyming....your best reading what others write, in fact, just read what Mimesis wrote...but Stay Up This was the most one-sided battle I have ever read Vote - Mimesis Vote on my battle - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...190#post2640190 |
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02-01-06, 01:11 PM | #24 | |
what dat be...
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IP: 5021 8C8D
Voted For: ~stylez~
i vote 4 stylez he had better rymes and flow and punches were nicer mime u hads good structure but ok rymes so vote 4 stylez rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219800 |
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02-01-06, 06:25 PM | #25 |
The Rise
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This was feedback posted for ~stylez~
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checkin polllllzzzzzzzzz
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02-04-06, 03:54 AM | #26 | |
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Yeah, somebody drop the last vote on this or something.
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02-05-06, 04:53 PM | #27 | |
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Word .
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02-05-06, 04:58 PM | #28 | |
NO SURRENDER
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Voted For: Mimesis.
No chance... I see your sig.. now you know I'm kicking this right Cause we do know you.........as the worst fucking kid on the site Cause you're a fucking queer.. and now its over.. that's whats up I don't got mud on my shoes.. but I'll still leave this Tyle fucked up VS nothin. Easy vote.
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