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yea boo u kno i gotta get back to writing been busy with school lately
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IP:
i really didn't like some of the lines...well, for flow wise...other than that, it was okay
Kill em cold blooded without a clue of death in my techniques best line in there, i thought you kinda strayed from your topic though, i really like what you did at the end, or whatever, near the middle to the end, where you started questioning beliefs, but i don't think your whole piece tied in with that.....but, thats just me not bad, keep up
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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IP:
Nice drop ma. But yeah flow was good, structure was also good, had emotion in it too which went good with the lines...overall great...Keep up the good work.
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IP:
^Lmao.. you didn't even read it.
Anyway I only read a little bit.. sorry ma. I'll read the rest later though, but overall on what I read so far, it's pretty good.
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