listenin, liking how u put Jayz at the begining, gives a nice intro, beat is nice, like how the drums come in on the pianos, youre flow is hot, real dope, I think you gotta deliver this better, it seems a hyped beat, but youre goin laid back, but it works im feelin u, hook has a good theme to it however A................R.t.i.s.........t....too many spaces, however lyrics are crazy and youre flow is sick...emotion is good, and presence is dope...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...991#post2662991

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can you rtf

feed used 2/19 "Chill Wit' Me"

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Listening:

Intro i like how ya put jay-z on. Beat is nice i really like it. Flow is dope it fits nice. Lyrics are great, liking em'. Delivery is dope which makes ur presence way better. Hook is aight but like Inter said to many gaps. Your emotion is great and fits the track!

quality is tight i think.....like this beat..jay shit was nice....u sound like a west coast head....lyric was pritty tight...nuthing stood out realy...but was nice...idk about the spelling shit....nice multis here n their...door close line was nice..gets a bit deeper towards the end...still not feeling the spelling shit tho..good track tho

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

i dont think ive ever heard g: deuce on audio b4, o well, here goes nuthin, lol...

...listenin, im lovin the intro, nice lyriks and im also feelin the beat but i feel like your delivery coulda been a lil better...overall this shitt was hott tho, only thing i think could be better is delivery but thats all...nice job mayne

could ya rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977