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Old 02-19-06, 01:42 PM   #16
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Old 02-20-06, 07:05 AM   #17
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Intro i like how ya put jay-z on. Beat is nice i really like it. Flow is dope it fits nice. Lyrics are great, liking em'. Delivery is dope which makes ur presence way better. Hook is aight but like Inter said to many gaps. Your emotion is great and fits the track!
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Old 02-20-06, 02:28 PM   #18
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quality is tight i think.....like this beat..jay shit was nice....u sound like a west coast head....lyric was pritty tight...nuthing stood out realy...but was nice...idk about the spelling shit....nice multis here n their...door close line was nice..gets a bit deeper towards the end...still not feeling the spelling shit tho..good track tho
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Old 02-23-06, 06:43 PM   #19
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i dont think ive ever heard g: deuce on audio b4, o well, here goes nuthin, lol...

...listenin, im lovin the intro, nice lyriks and im also feelin the beat but i feel like your delivery coulda been a lil better...overall this shitt was hott tho, only thing i think could be better is delivery but thats all...nice job mayne

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Old 02-24-06, 01:54 AM   #20
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Lol at sayin my flow was off. Anwayz, Ummm....uppin....

STFU, it was to me. Christ, nobody can take a fucking critque nowadays.
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