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Old 03-23-06, 05:46 PM   #1
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personally i wasn't feeling the hook... but the rhyme scheme and flow and shyt was mos def on point!!! best flow i've heard from you yet... and of course leady gon' hate on it cuz it's about him and dude obviously dislikes for other reasons than the music...

but yeah... shyt was kinda loud on da hook and i couldn't make out what you said at the end of it... beat was different.... kinda wierd for a diss track but ya pulled it off... lots of energy and ya adlibs are waaayyyy better than what ya used to do....(uhhh.... uh huh... etc)



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Old 03-23-06, 05:14 PM   #2
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no i wasnt hating, i have given him props for previous tracks he has done, despite not liking him.

my opinion on him does not determine my view on his music.

but his flow was decent, yet in-consistant at times, delivery was monotonous and boring, it lacked animation, and the only good thing on his lyrics was his rhyme scheme.

seriously, kids need to quit riding dudes jock strap.
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Old 03-23-06, 06:52 PM   #3
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well check this tonight...hopefully
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Old 03-24-06, 02:06 AM   #4
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wow q....less then expected...you sound like you tried to put too many words in a ya verse....sounds rushed....not what im used to hearin from you....the hook is catchy...no problems with it....second verse is a lil better with teh flow....they lyrics seem to be alright....nothing stands out, but like i said for him nothing sucked....i mean id say you won cuz his wasnt really taht well put together...but i expect more from you...and you know you didnt come hard with this one....you can do better
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