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Old 04-02-06, 04:03 PM   #1
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Checking a track...

The Genesis-

Flow is pretty good. It's kind of repetitive, but it's still good. Lyrics are decent...basic at times, but decent. Your voice still reminds me of Tupac's, but your delivery and presence is lacking, and it's noticable. Breath control is noticeably lacking at times as well. Overall...it was better than what I last heard from you. Impressive, but nothing too specail. Just keep working on breath control and delivery, and you will be a recognizable head. Keep it up.
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Old 04-03-06, 09:12 AM   #2
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Old 04-03-06, 09:29 PM   #3
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Props on the mixtape son....why only 7 tracks tho?..shoulda least had 10..a solid double digit number....see u opened wit 10 deadly venoms...an re-recorded it...def an improvement....good track....Genesis was koo..anthony hamilton one...ya vocals was being drowned out by beat IMO...drops in ocean..props on beat choice, I always loved that beat....I got the DL of same beat an wit hook off limewire lol....however vocals was low as well..but liked the fast flow...an all the multies..def enjoyed it...the next track lol u already know what it is lol.....Peace....eh...I've heard so many fucking remixes of this song that I'm jus sick of it...so it kinda hurt my enjoy of this track cuz u picked one of the msot overused beats on mixtapes as of late....but with that aside...feeling the story...but prolly shoulda dubbed ya vocals or at least a echo...aside from that koo...overall its a good drop..katz should feel it.....1
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