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Old 05-20-06, 03:42 PM   #16
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youz a fake 'n liar and.. you flip to heat boards, 'n i just bring the iron man..
ur concepts are Dublin back so much.. they've become a real city in Ireland
I'll recite the line, you got no life.. this lazy dyke won't work any harder
Mime is so much of a couch potato, he's an instant mash w/ out the water

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You've elevated. . but the league knows that you won't be rockin' me
Cause if Met's dope as hell. . then it's only true if you remove the apostrophe
I'm just tired of wasting time now. . I'ma be owning this dawg
Just by dropping a Met-A-4. . without writing any type of poem at all

Alright first and foremost I was disapointed with the battle. I haven't seen much of Untold apart from his very generous votes where he quotes 3/4 of most peoples verses. Mimesis has elevated LOADS over the last few months and is officially dope, but didn't show it today. He won on consistency but his two quotables weren't particularly hard. The Mets one was nice but could have been wording better. Untold had his opener which was best line of the battle and came pretty inconsistent after that. He had good concepts with not so good wording. The couch potato one raised a smile so I quoted it. Mim didn't have anything apart from his personals that great but came more consistent and so wins this battle.

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Old 05-20-06, 06:12 PM   #17
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youz a fake 'n liar and.. you flip to heat boards, 'n i just bring the iron man..
ur concepts are Dublin back so much.. they've become a real city in Ireland
mim's been derailed and you suck, but always being late doesn't seem fair
your so much of a bitch, you need more extensions than black chick's hair
'cat, i stab tracks, but our collabo, you can stuff it up your ass crack
cause i didn't seriously wanna record, i just needed something to laugh at

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Okay. . I may have posted them again, but we still hate this herbs lines
I get props on the same shit twice. .
. .we just get tired of yours half way through the first time. .
Those lines beat you before and they beat your verse quick, and you're dead
This is the first verse I've posted. .
. .and the second time you've got your ass kicked in this thread
You've elevated. . but the league knows that you won't be rockin' me
Cause if Met's dope as hell. . then it's only true if you remove the apostrophe
I'm just tired of wasting time now. . I'ma be owning this dawg
Just by dropping a Met-A-4. . without writing any type of poem at all

v/ mim... wasnt as good of a read as it should have been
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Old 05-20-06, 11:19 PM   #18
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your get'n fathered, make'n sure you can't see farther through your site
but that sparkle in your eye, is just the blade in ur face reflectin off the light

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n our last battle you bitch and moaned. . Haha, believe this guy's corny
You pulled every bitch move in the book. .
. .that makes War and Peace look like a bedtime story
Here's a follow up. . he's back to whining, so I'll swing till his pencil's dead
History does repeat itself. .
. .but you've bitched enough to make the whole school look special ed
You're catching another beat down. . I don't care who you've beat, yo
Cause you'll host enough injuries to sell your body off as a reality tv show


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Old 05-21-06, 01:50 AM   #19
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Alright, good battle dude. Now, back to collabing on songs and stuff.
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Old 05-21-06, 05:05 AM   #20
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yea.. i was like, thinking the same thing.

o, btw.. i've started writing for the other song.
you want a chorus on it and shit, or do you wanna take care of that?
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Old 05-21-06, 12:46 PM   #21
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Nah, you can get the chorus. I've started writing as well. It should be tight.
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Old 05-21-06, 02:11 PM   #22
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Mimesis wins 7-0.

Mimesis wins (8-0)
Met-A-4 loses (3-1)
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