nah i decided i wasnt really feeling the 2nd verse
maybe cuz it didnt fit the tone set by the 1st verse
but good concept overal nicely done

This was a really good piece I could feel the emotion and like hatred in it. Ya structure and flow was good, and so was the vocabulary that ya used. This would make a good audio. Lookin forward to more of ya work. 9/10

pretty decent actually a dope drop....read it and the i really like the hook not too much to breakdown and feed on these types of drops tho to get better feed drop it as an Audio

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crhyme sindicate
Open Mic Hall Of Famer

mad props 2 ya i like it