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Old 05-31-06, 09:48 PM   #1
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4-1 me uppin...........
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Old 06-01-06, 01:26 AM   #2
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You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines
I spit,you burst into flames,Punches'll beating you worse.
Now Im wreckin this board..
..........While ppl. get ^^^ just reading ur verse
EVEN THOUGH BOARD WORDPLAY IS PLAYED
take time to diss a girl.. pfft y’all the same.. just different utensils
her useless paper comes from under a skirt, yours from under ya pencil
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement

VS.

Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio
With flow that fucked, he shouldn’t be afraid of prison like other dudes are
Why should he worry about showers when he’ll never drop a smooth bar


Yeah, that was pretty much the battle. Those bars were nice, but *** just had a better overall verse and more quotables and shit... so yeh, he takes this.

V/ - ***
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Old 06-01-06, 09:01 AM   #3
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You toss up,rotate,transform your rhyme,Ur wasting time.
Cuz ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^...is acronym of you flipping lines.

Ok I want this to be known you fucked up and put acronym you meant synonyms...and Acronym is something like MIA=Missing In Action AWOL=Absent WithOut Leave blah blah get me? ok so that hit but yet it didn't

Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement

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Tryna find a place alone to rap, with your gaudy flow
Cuz the walls have ears…so they’re glad as fuck you don’t do audio
The fuck kinda alias is that? Your so laim dude
But if was known to be that wack, Id edit out my own name too
Talking bout your 1 in a million? There’s thousand like you or better
Cuz the only thing that’s 1-1,000,000 is your battle record

Close Battle, Some played material but nice flips...Solid Wordplay...I feel Lex slipped away with this one...Yea *** came out pretty dope liked the opener but lol get educated first lol...So for Better qoutables, I'm givin it to Lex...Tough Choice

Vote - Lex Close
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Old 06-01-06, 03:19 PM   #4
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iight 5-2 me uppin............
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Old 06-01-06, 04:02 PM   #5
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Uve been pwn'd biter,It disgusting you act like a whore to.
Im 2 far ahead of you...
....atleast you got sumthing to look foward to.
I spit,you burst into flames,Punches'll beating you worse.
Now Im wreckin this board..
..........While ppl. get ^^^ just reading ur verse.
lex will polly no show?fuck it,why rack up Gayconcepts on clearance
We knew lex into guise..An I aint talkin bout appearance.
He's never heard of Adam Sandler; Which is not a surprise ..
but he's seen The Longest Yard.
............. Ive slapped mine in his mouth a couple of times.
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement

no those arent quotables, its how many played concepts you had lol but i did like the way you worded them, but either way their played so i cant quote em.
here's one i did like though.....

jus face it your a nobody famous like g-unit to prove it bitch
i asked my mans if he knew you he was like umm "WHOOO KID"
^^^wasnt amazing or anything i've just never seen it b4 n it sorta made me chuckle

vs

Dudes stressing over the line limit and being a douche, going 10 over
This bitch is getting all twisted out of shape when he usually just bends over
n i was s'posed to come in with puns, punches and the dopest stuff
but then i realized *** is enough of a joke for the both of us

v/ lex
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Old 06-01-06, 08:01 PM   #6
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iight 5-3.............................
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Old 06-02-06, 01:05 PM   #7
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Old 06-03-06, 03:53 AM   #8
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^wat?............................................. ........................
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Old 06-03-06, 08:05 AM   #9
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take time to diss a girl.. pfft y’all the same.. just different utensils
her useless paper comes from under a skirt, yours from under ya pencil
this niggaz rattled with anguished tossed and amazement
your shits allways a best cellar
but next time bitch keep it in the basement



With flow that fucked, he shouldn’t be afraid of prison like other dudes are
Why should he worry about showers when he’ll never drop a smooth bar


eh battle. but i give it to asterisk because he had an aiight verse. i really didn't like the "^^" lines, just didnt appeal to me but i really wasn't feeling Lex's verse either.. askterisk had more quotables.

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Old 06-03-06, 06:16 PM   #10
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6-3 me uppin........and when does voting close?????
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Old 06-03-06, 06:57 PM   #11
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v/ lex


*** is a biter

Quote:
Originally Posted by Camarac
He's never heard of Adam Sandler; Which is not a surprise ..
.. but he's seen The Longest Yard. Ive slapped mine in his mouth a couple of times.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ht=longest+yard

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vlad Tempus
J no shows?fuck it,why rack up Gayconcepts on clearance
We knew Dom's into guise..An I aint talkin bout appearance.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...uise+appearance

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vlad Tempus
So plz ur not steller at throwin anything with amazement.
Ur audio's are best cellar's..
....But next time keep em in the basement.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...cellar+basement

look familiar?

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Old 06-03-06, 07:38 PM   #12
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Lmao. Yeah, Lex Close wins.
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