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this was ok....real thuggish mayne nice but work on voacb thats all.
nice collaba nd nice verses though real decent. RTF you bitches!
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Shut up and get that development crew going
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You Love My Style.
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IP:
This was cool collab ya'll both stayed on contend...overall i have to say it came together well
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IP:
Thank you..........
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~lyrical confucius~
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hell yea me and t.g. brought that shit together nicely
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this was nice..wit that hook it'd be a good audio..yall shud try this on audio..just work a lil bit on your wordplay n creativity..nice piece
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Thanxx boss uppin
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that was hot...hook was dope....
both verses were real good, good flow good rhymes and overall this was tight |
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~lyrical confucius~
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IP:
thanx kidd uppin
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this was fire drop, was feelin the chorus and both verses, keep droppin, this was hot
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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thanxx uppin.....
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~lyrical confucius~
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uppin baby and can we get some comments from a few vets
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IP:
yeah that wouldn't hurt uppin
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Better THAN You!
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IP:
Man...i love the hook, would be great on a audio if you could find the perfect beat and work it... Lyrics were Decent, No real Outshining on each other which is good, and really good balance between styles of how you two do it... Maybe work on a little creativity and wordplay, since this is a kinda thuggish ish, put some real kinda gangster wordplay to make it all the better lol..otherwise..nice flow..work it on audio..
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thanx kidd uppin
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