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06-17-06, 10:06 PM
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Listenin' beat is hot you already know that..Im feelin yo real vibes...yeah this track you can tell aint mixed propperly yet but still sounds real nice..your delivery is real nice like lupe fiasco so is the flow and the voice is real nice..im feelin this real ish..lyrics are nice as hell too...
Delivery: 9/10 Flow: 9.5/10 Lyrics: 9/10 Presence: 8/10 Emotion: 9/10 This was a near perfect track..nice 3 verses fam... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...204#post2772204 can you rtf thank you
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06-21-06, 03:30 AM
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wassup nigga lemme see if u did betta then my man Hitta...ahhhh i dunno..his was a lil bit more lyrical if u ask me but whatva..
i liked the first verse and that reverb makes the verse fit wit the beat..like its some old school shit...second verse..betta then the first IMO..damn its just a bit too loud..thrid verse was good too nigga..u still got it..im bout to drop a track or two so check that out nigga.. -Diabolic Verbal Assassins
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06-27-06, 10:19 PM
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^ thanks D. yea ya manz did drop a tight 3 on his joint.
good lookin to everyone who dropped some feed. really appreciate it.
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06-28-06, 02:07 AM
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IP:
your flow and dleivery fit perfectly to the beat, i dont really know wat 2 say, your nice bro, ur real nice...u got some production issues tho...need a decenmixdown holla at me, ill get my producer 2mix down 4 u...bless, try make more than 1track every 4months aswell lol
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06-28-06, 02:41 AM
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Best In The Game
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this beat is serious, quality aint that bad..kinda sound like this kid bloodshott i herd befor.
shoulldda sampled some shit in where the hook goes wouldda made it dope, flows good.. overall a good track jus shouldda put suttin where the hooks go, kinda plane jus hearin the lil sample in the beat but good track fam stay up -HH |
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06-28-06, 04:29 AM
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IP:
Damn, I liked this shit. I'd like to see something done with the hook maybe. Some ecko's would be nice off some of your dubs. Your flow was solid though, also delivered well with a smooth emotion. It sounded perfect man, it had my head bumpin. Alotta your shits pretty ill but if you mastered this it'd be very ill man. but overall I thought you took this nice, you did a great job man.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230629 1
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06-28-06, 10:25 PM
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IP:
Hoe... you never sent me that mixtape.
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