http://community.rapverse.com/showt...694#post2768694
here it is

and it takes time to get your text style down when your so used to flowing audio wise
its a big difference , i went thru the same thing
i was 3-5 when i started text
so i feel you
but i can tell you'll get better if you really want so keep it up

got u shaking like Harlem when I barge-in wit the 40 cal then let it rip...
I don’t mean to sound cocky...but I'll rip u quicker then mimesis ever did
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a King is to Livestrong but ur chance has been long gone
now i'll be known for passing by-King like i was Lance Armstrong.
no multis, personals, punches allows me to overshadow him
so only defeating he'll do is defeating the purpose of a text battlin'

vote: phryme...raw got way better in these last few weeks thou

thanks for the feed back....I just cuz I aint winning dont mean I cant grow from this shit...I'll just have to wreck the next nigga twice as hard to get my shit back....1

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got u shaking like Harlem when I barge-in wit the 40 cal then let it rip...
I don’t mean to sound cocky...but I'll rip u quicker then mimesis ever did

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a King is to Livestrong but ur chance has been long gone
now i'll be known for passing by-King like i was Lance Armstrong.
throwing that definition in ur verse is giving u the worst buzz
it has a better chancing of winning than ur actual verse does.
no multis, personals, punches allows me to overshadow him
so only defeating he'll do is defeating the purpose of a text battlin'



v/ Phryme

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

Raw King

the King is still going raw....9 months later….u one of the many niggaz my style gave birth to....
cuz they say sperm is good for breast cancer....that explains why Opus is never sick....

stretch a couple of your bars but it's good kidd um you gave your opponent plenty ammo with that definition, lol

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Phryme

now i'll be known for passing by-King like i was Lance Armstrong.
throwing that definition in ur verse is giving u the worst buzz
it has a better chancing of winning than ur actual verse does.
i'd feel bad to murk u out and make ur vitals roll over
with so many deadlines even ur closer is looking for final closure.

nice structure kidd in whole the verse was nice homie big ups

vote: Phryme

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OP won this.

Pryme just had the better verse, better punches, better everything. decent battle thou.

I just pust the deifnition there becouse I wanted to know wat it was....It had nothing to do wit the battle....and he still kinda fed off my verse too but w/e....rule really dont matter here...

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and I’ll stomp ur face…like a squadron marching...till u start just barffin….
and u can catch 300 punches in 14 lines like a flea market bargain...
got u shaking like Harlem when I barge-in wit the 40 cal then let it rip...
I don’t mean to sound cocky...but I'll rip u quicker then mimesis ever did

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u being an unknown dude says enough in ur own truth
and it only gives u little room to talk like Mets in a phone booth.
throwing that definition in ur verse is giving u the worst buzz
it has a better chancing of winning than ur actual verse does.
no multis, personals, punches allows me to overshadow him
so only defeating he'll do is defeating the purpose of a text battlin'

was a pretty decent battle. I got pryme taking this by a lil tho. not bad by both.

V/p

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voting links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229827
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229828
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229842