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Old 06-15-06, 06:20 PM   #16
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read it.. wasn't sure, so here's the line 4 line bdown,

mon

im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
i HATE these kinda lines, unless there unbelievably clever... "blah blah blah, [insert other persons name] cuz thats who i shuld be battling"... so, no
You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
ehh, ok
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
ehh, no
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
ok.. that was ok..
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause
ehhh, nah

spul

Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
AHHH!!!! noooo
This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
no
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
i think this may'v one it.. even tho its not that great,
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!
ehh, not really
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite
definitly not

they both used that "name/i shuld be battling instead of u".... mons was better, 2nd lines were almost equal.. mons was alittle better...3rd line, spuL thus far had line of the battle... the 9 next to ur head was simple, but i think more impactful than spuls 4th bar... both closers were bad.

damn, close.. was gonna giv it to spul...but

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Old 06-15-06, 11:57 PM   #17
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aiight uppin' this 3-4.....
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Old 06-16-06, 08:15 AM   #18
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head

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Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!


First off, I don't care about you saying I can't vote SPuL. I ain't even on that shit anymore and I never hate vote anyway. Not to mention that when I tried to have Appo banned from voting on my battles... Kemp said that anyone can vote, so I am voting.

Onwards and upwards...
... spul won this battle relatively easily. I was feeling that opener from Monsieur, it was ILL. And the puttin a 9 to ya head line was cool. The others just fell short. I liekd the concepts, especially for the vice versa line but it wasn't executed well enough. Spul dropped hard this week, not the gay shit he brought last week. He went for a similar style of opener as Monsiuer and pulled it off. Also, the closer was ILL. The other two bars were I quoted were cool to and spul was only like one bar from me quoting his entire verse. It was consistent throughout and shit... and overall it was more polished and hard hitting.

V/ - SPuL
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Old 06-16-06, 02:33 PM   #19
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

YOU had one of those verses that looked good the 1st read but re reading it takes away from it
decent overal

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Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!

SPUL SHIT WAS WAYYY BETTER THAN LAST WEEK LIKE NICK SAID
OUT CLASSED EM
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Old 06-16-06, 08:03 PM   #20
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
vs.
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
2 to 1
vote- mon... close, but the other guy said my name so i gotta give it to 'em
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Old 06-16-06, 09:56 PM   #21
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^wtf how you gon vote after we been beefing in the mag thread? lmao wtf? and "the other guy said my name" wtf kinda vote is that. seriously... fuck outta here
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Old 06-17-06, 09:18 AM   #22
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better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head
SPuL's such a loser that he baught his chors...
and he capitalized the L... just to support the cause

started wack then got ill.

VS

I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Get your mind involved in it, son. This the time to prove what you about
...Mine's ^^^^ in brainstorm season...
........ ... while mon's is obviously in the midst of an eternal drought!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!


Pretty much even on quotables, but spul had the played LBL line and mons other 2 seemed more consistant.

Close battle.

V./mon
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Old 06-17-06, 10:36 AM   #23
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ehh ok uppppppppp
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Old 06-17-06, 10:59 AM   #24
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You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
your no legend killer, your never flexing a vet...
theres a 9 next your name...
... now whatch me put one next to your head

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I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!

Close battle...Mon you had a few dull points in your verse...SPuL you came with some pretty played stuff...Both Openers didn't hit...I think Mon got it, he had more clever lines...

Vote - Monsieur
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Old 06-17-06, 11:32 AM   #25
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
You were NEVER good, and youll never set sails, duke
'Cos the peak of ya game'll just be where i impale you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways

Vs.

I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Whoever wins, goes to the contendership, but kid, you're going down
Cuz I bring that hotshh<--- while that's just who you wont face next round

Mon got this, the two lines I quoted from SPuL were good, but I wasnt feelin tha rest of his verse, Mon came pretty consistent throughout... and wtf at all the "L" lines, shits been played ssooo hard... much respect to both emcees

vote- Monsieur
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^wtf how you gon vote after we been beefing in the mag thread? lmao wtf? and "the other guy said my name" wtf kinda vote is that. seriously... fuck outta here

then u go and vote agianst me in my battle... hypicritical much? or just a big baby
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Old 06-17-06, 04:07 PM   #27
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V/ Spizzle
this was a good battle, but i tihnk spul came a bit harder... i thoguht it waas hilariuos how u used like the same opener concept, but i think spul spun it a lot better wit tha hot shh play.
spul had a lot more quoteables to me, i thought mons's only quoteable was the impale line... and then spul had the opener, the LBL punch, and the trying to be polite punch, which really pulled him away from the comp in my opinion.
again, v spul for coming with more consistantly good punches.
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Old 06-17-06, 04:20 PM   #28
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im incredible, its inevitable im one step ahead of you
thats picture perfect rhyming^
like the kid i should be clowning instead of you
better hail duke, found u out and your old names
figured your alias must vice versa cos i heard u go both ways

vs.

This fatty's life is like the LBL. Clearly you can tell
Cuz even if he drop a LB or 2... he still gon be left with the L!
I only hear Monsier, whenever I go to France and choose to dine
I ain't saying you off the hook<--- I'm just placing you infront of mine!
Watch me rip this fag up quickly. It'll surely be a sight
Cuz we all know monsier to lose...and I ain't trying to be polite!

3-2

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Old 06-17-06, 05:52 PM   #29
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7-8, should be 7-7 cuz fuckin' PP dsoesn't know how to vote. how you gonna call that an explained vote?
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