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06-28-06, 12:03 AM
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aight this is entirely constructive criticism, so dont be shittin ya draws or nothin'.
1st one.. -not feelin the yellow, more colors woulda done it well especially since from what i can see, it's a beach.. i don't know why it's all color deprived and shit. -the text, KINDA, just a bit, clashes, nothing serious though, i can live with it. -not feeling the mixtape text on the bottom as well, clashes with the parental advisory 2nd one.. -onec again my dude, whassup with this single colored stuff -not feeling the crown. everything would be ill with some color balance but then you got that ugly ass cartoon crown there.. annnnnnnnd... i think thats about it.. yup
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06-28-06, 02:58 AM
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uhh...ok thanks
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06-28-06, 04:45 AM
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aiight first one i aint feelin the font the colors are yucky looks like someone pissed all over this sheet of paper u handin out ahahah overall not feelin it 2nd cover i like that font the crown shit i aint feelin tho the bg is jus too blurry maybe make it more visible |
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