ok cool checkin your shit out.....

very nice quality...wait are u talking about 50 cent??? Delivery is good, likeing first verse's delivery and lyrics. Chorus is real tight. And i dont mean to repeat what u said to me in my thread but yea now that i think about it, your delivery DOES sound like you're trying hard instead of a delivery that would come natuarlly to you.
All in all nice drop, alittle hard to understand what you're saying at times. Second dude has a cool voice, and yea thats about it.

7/10 much better than alot of ppl, keep at it.