^aiight appreciate the feed man. uppp

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listened to this yeterday

i liked the beat choice was cool delivery was nice...lyrics were aight but can't really say much on them coz i don't personally know the kid you dissin...but if what you were spittin was true (and i have no reason to doubt that it wasn't btw) then this was an aight diss...could of been better but then again there's always space for improvment...

keep droppin and RTF in my link (The Madness)

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^aiight thanks for feed man

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ehhhh... omma lot more critical than everyone else... it was aiight but lyrically it didn't really grab me.... the beat was cool... the hook was straighth but that echo stuff needs to go... it mad e the track seem.. i don't know... kinda like ya got tired of mixing it down... flow was ok from both... not really too many quotables besides the drive by line... i'd expect a comeback for this simply because i don't think it was damaging enough... both came with a different level of quality... spul... up ya vocals a tad, man... first time i really listened to ya stuff... not bad... but unlike others... i concentrate on the lyrics and how ya put ya werds and thoughts together... to me, as a lyricist, that's more important than the beat (which is a close second)... content and how you get ya point across are what make or break you on a diss track... delivery has gotta be convincing too...

i wouldn't have wasted time on a 13 yo personally, unless he happened to spit some flamage that i just HAD to retaliate, nah mean?... kids that age gon talk trash regardless...

but yeah... decent... nothing extraordinary, but not a bad track...

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^aiight appreciate the good feed, man. thanks. upp

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Triple with the intro, sounds all gangstery and shit

Spul comes in a little soft, so UP YOUR GODDAMN EMOTION :angry: But lol at 13 year olds thinking their gangsta, hahaha..Hook is fucking raaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww...2nd verse, much better than the first..Lmfao @ the full of shit line..Haha, man, this is owned.

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^lol appreciate the fedd man. upppp

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Lol... the shots have been fired @ a 13yr old biznitch.

*listening*

Beat is pretty nice, and both flowed pretty nicely on it (even though Triple only did a hook). Triple N should've dropped a verse, forget a hook! But anywayz, quality was nice, came hear you clearly n' shit. Punches were pretty coo. Didn't think you needed Triple on this bitch, but it was straight though.

Put this shit on ya myspace (if aint already on there). Lil kid aint gonna have nuttin to come back with, poor sap. :/ Anyway... overall this diss track was pretty nice.

*runs*