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Old 07-06-06, 05:22 PM   #16
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Most people don't think I'll go there but I'm sayin it.
If Virginity's a weapon...Rex is Armed & Dangerous.
...& Come on lil' ngga, be glad your life is mourned.
Cause I'll be whipping Rexless, 'til the Harzard lights come on.

Rell the rest of your verse was pretty solid too, just i dont think the concepts were worded as well as these 1st 2 bars. plus i cant quote your entire verse cuz then they wouldnt be actual quotes lol

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horrible wording, stretched lines, get rid of all the fuckin decoration n shit. like the "'s, -'s, etc. just makes u look noobish.

v/ rell for obvious reasons
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Old 07-06-06, 06:34 PM   #17
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bangs my head on the computer bored WTF??

aight then whatever.....
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Old 07-06-06, 10:39 PM   #18
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upp'in for more votes....................
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Old 07-08-06, 06:13 PM   #19
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Most people don't think I'll go there but I'm sayin it.
If Virginity's a weapon...Rex is Armed & Dangerous.
...& Come on lil' ngga, be glad your life is mourned.
Cause I'll be whipping Rexless, 'til the Harzard lights come on.

^^lines i felt ..so rell had some other good idea but obviously rexless didn't bring much this time

vote-so rell

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Old 07-08-06, 07:20 PM   #20
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Most people don't think I'll go there but I'm sayin it.
If Virginity's a weapon...Rex is Armed & Dangerous.
...& Come on lil' ngga, be glad your life is mourned.
Cause I'll be whipping Rexless, 'til the Harzard lights come on.
Get the .45 Clip, Clap it - now it's a fine case.
Bullets go thru your head...
& have you pullin out an Atlas, lookin for your Mind State.
Blast back your fat ass, Your not gonna win...Okay?
You've got an Appetite for losing and RV's just a Buffet.
...& You stay saying you gonna beat me alirght dood.
I'll Crush your Grain of Skill before it Grows more Herbs like you.

v.s.

(1st line was too filler and made no sense so I wont quote it)
you couldnt have a fly-flow if u actully gave the Mic to Jorden...
rhymes fluently potent.... M.J 'just skip postin' take time to consider ya health...
cuz the 'registration process',...is tha only way u makin a name fo ya self...
(this line was terrible so I wont quote it)
face-it when da 'heart monitor stops' be da only time u droppin 'str8 lines'...

this battle was really close. both dropped a really good verse and rex did a lot better then Iv seen em do in cyphers. but I have to give this to rell too cuz his lines were a lil bit more solid and he had better flow. rex...ur shit was good too but u had some lines that didn't make sence cuz they was just filler lines for ur punches. try to fix ur structure and flow a bit man.

v/ Mc Jordan

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Old 07-09-06, 09:16 AM   #21
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So Rell wins 7-1.

So Rell wins (10-5)
rexless loses (2-2)
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