You're a problem to child labor, but here's what I just can't get
How many chinese kids did it take to fabricate a brim wider then ya fat head?!
Decent, good concept just.. not that hard of a diss

F'real, you'll prolly duck the challenge, cuz you know you fear me
And i'd call you out, but you got no fucking ears so I doubt you'd hear me
Lol.

Pout with tears b, cuz your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Cuz those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace
You're stretching, he doesn't really have beady eyes.

So respect this, fuck Mets shit... he'll die when i'm rippin' him
And your pics are so fuckin' small that i'm suprised you fit in them!
Typical pic line. no

soo.........
I heard your girl's a fuckin' slut, loose as fuck, I mean it guy
She known for takin' in a foot... and I ain't talkin' 'bout penis size!
no. corny concept, corny, corny, corny, please don't diss people for their "girl" that you prolly never heard anything about, obviously fake personals are a turn off to the voters, trust me.

This Fat Joe wannabe champed RM, but his ass aint hurting me
So don't be too bigheaded...
...wait, that would require plastic surgery!
wording is way off of what you intended to say

You look like Jarod BEFORE Subway, so I suggest that you go and try it
Cuz you gon be losing, wait, I ain't say you gonna dieyet
no.

Got your hat tipped to the side, but make sure you don't nudge me, bud
Even your damn hat's....
... tryin' to run away from your ugly mug!
typical stuff

haha... NEXT!!

Username



Whoa!
I'll keep a few feet back, I don't wanna be a black and blue disaster
Cuz those mutton chops could probably beat the shit out of a kung-fu master
ok
HA, you fucking joking Pinnochio? No doubt ima nail him
That killer triangle ya nose forms makes Bermuda's look safe to sail in
typical stuff, in the fact that its not very creative

In this you'll fail bitch... then get sonned, like an orphan, kid
Those caterpillar eyebrows look like they're going through metamorphisis
his eyebrows look normal to me, and really, this was a "forced" concept anyway...

I'm whoring kids, and i'm giving these lames a fight
You rocked the goatee and now farm animals are ashamed for life!
not a good diss, you're saying its shameful to rock a goatee...why? where's the diss..? why does his goatee look so terrible..? you have to quickly point these things out in your lines for them to be effective

You mothafuckas is ugly, like Robkilla!

haha yea son..
We already know your nose is far out ahead, but everybody look again
Your fuckin' chin's trying to make a race out of it. Shit, either one could win
typical
User ain't wanna respect his elders? shitttt.... now you've done it dude
OF COURSE my skill's apparent, I mean we all see how I'm sonnin' you
played
Your style is soo outdated, kid, and I don't mean to bitch
But your nose is so far out... it'd make a hippie start to trip
ok
Wtf is up with the wardrobe? This ain't Star Wars but, kid hey...
OF course you ARE the one with the force...
... in every single one of your wordplays!
played


I'm not going to leave feedback for shit I thought was good, and if i thought it was ok, chances are I will point out what I didn't like about it moreso than what I did like about it. that way u can improve off of what I didn't like. anyway, it seems like I didn't like it much from the feed, but it actually was a good read. unexpected, but nice job

pz

My breakdown would look like Feeble's :/.........Seein who ur comp was iono if that was acceptable??

respect 4 showin

^aiight word.

and thanks feeble for breakdown

spul got a nice crib

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lol...that ain't much of a diss tho!!!!!!! hahaha...that's his neighbors crib....lmbao!! j/p yo!

^lol thanks yo. my parents, but still word ~_~

^lmao @ the thought of going to a neighbors house to sit on their front steps for pic. hahahaha

Mets & Username no show

JTR & SPuL Advance