good lookin on the feed fam

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First off......post your whole soundclick next time instead of just the hi fi link cause that shit never works for me

Anyway, I'm smart enough to find your shit in your sig. You didn't do bad for your first audio. To help you out like ten hundred percent, I'm gonna give you two quick tips if you use Cool Edit. First off, when you're in single track mode with your vocals (no beat) go to effects>>Amplitude>>Amplify>>Center Wave. That will hel if you spit in on the right side or left side of the mic too much. Second, go to Effects>>Amplitude>>Hard Limiting and change the first number to -6.5 and the second number to 1.8. This will help make your vocals sound more the same loudness all the way through. If it makes your vocals way too low, just raise the first number (make it closer to 0).

Now for the actual spitting. You kinda got a monotone delivery on this one, but it's your first one and delivery comes with being comfortable in front of a mic. Second is your flow fell off a couple of times. It sounded like you were reading from a paper, which isn't bad (cause I do it too), but it shouldn't sound like you're doing it. Read over your lines with the beat five to ten times before you actually start spitting....it helps you remember how you planned to spit certain spots with the beat. Keep dropping them though, cause you have a pretty good voice for this and it's definitely not a bad start

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thanks enyg im gone use them tips 4 the track ima do 2night

appreciate all the love ya

i cant wait 2 hear my shit in a month or so lol

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told u the fuckin link aint work










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i changed it now...

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WOW...WOW....WOW


shit u are the first nubie...that i hear that ha d a so damn tight flow...shit it was like u cudnt just stop...lol..mayne i liked the wordplays on the lyrics...all u gatta do as for e is up ur vocals...it was kinna low...but mayne...the beat was just gd the way it was u know...nice shit mayne...really tight!


hit my xtasy thanx

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thanx mami....

ima drop constantly so i can elevate and take ova in this shit

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wow.. my negga Troop..haha

quality is not bad u need to get ya swagger up and also get on grind a bit more cuz it sound like u just readin

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4sho fam....u kno ima keep elevateing

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k...intro was cool...wudda been dope with some Dolemite on there


beat doesn't live up to the hype of the intro

Is this your verse coming in? Wow...it sounded like you were just talking...You need better mixing bro

The flow isn't bad...but, your vocals sounds like they're sitting on top of the beat instead of within it...

a lil fresh rhyming here and there

voice sounds good on track

at the 1:40 mark, your delivery sounded like you were out of breath

"effn hate" was aiight...but it didn't rhyme with anything...So, it was like out of place

This was a slick soundin track tho...

U have potential...keep droppin

RTF please on "DO NOT PUSH"


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lmao i did both verses and the choruses on one bar

i kno how 2 do it now...split that shit up

but thanx 4 feed fam

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no doubt...cud u RTF here

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231557


thank u

Done...............................

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you got skill.. you just need to work out a few kinks i like your style... shizz dope...

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