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Old 07-19-06, 01:36 AM   #16
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*Dangles the AI Chain ova these ni99az*

Troop & Kontro Collab comin soon

Ai n the Buildin

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Old 07-19-06, 01:40 AM   #17
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Thats whats up. AI audio. we got this shit on lock. Just when you thought it couldn't get any worse. We aint goin for the KO we goin for the kill
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Old 07-19-06, 02:05 AM   #18
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AI Collab COmin soon....

Give me time 2 elevate 1st lol
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Old 07-19-06, 02:51 AM   #19
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this shit was cool first dude was ight flow was coo but sum shit was rushed needs a better mic gud shit tho q your flow was like biggies on this song he was on but like in the end u switched it up delivery was like big but it was cool overall pretty tight shit man nice drop
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Old 07-19-06, 03:00 AM   #20
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thanks 4 the feed bro.................
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Old 07-19-06, 04:00 AM   #21
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I feel you should of cut the sample straigth after "danny" stopped talking.

marly sample is cool.

troop you sounding solid bro, nice original style brought to the table.
Hit me up on a collabo bro. nice flow decent rhymes. Fuck the quality bro, too many people stress bout quality on RV. mafuckers we making music from our bedrooms, too many expect million doller perfect production.
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Old 07-19-06, 04:20 AM   #22
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Ooh shit A.I on the grind..haha

movie clip is sick..it goes wit the message...

wow Bob is in here...? ooh shit its him..i loved this beat

Jimmy flow was grymy just need betta quality , presence was nice...it sounds more like you readin from paper..so u should get the emotions on there man...but i have to say this way betta than ya first.

Q- flow was cool, lyrics was sick...on the real i have to say ya'll came together nicely am lovin the chorus dammit..
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Old 07-19-06, 04:35 AM   #23
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4sho thanx 4 the feed fam

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Itz a Wrap people
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Old 07-19-06, 10:37 AM   #24
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listenin....

dope beat....delivery is comin in strong.... flow is pretty solid too....first verse is pretty nice.... this 2nd cat got waaay better quality and it shows.... yall should try to atleast get the vocals the same volume.... 2nd cat tho im feelin, coo voice... flow is straight....solid words too....nice verse...

overall this joint is pretty tight
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Old 07-19-06, 10:52 AM   #25
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intro was a lil long... i woulda only used the part where they started with the hip hop shyt...maybe a lil bit before that... love da marley sample...

thought you was troop at first... still kinda do in a way... not sure...lol

first verse was hot... feeling the lyrics... had a menacing type vibe to it... matched the beat well... quality can be upped ...a lot more... but other than that this shyt was good..

Q.. typical Q quality... so we ain't even gonna comment any further on that...lol... not ya best verse here, dawg... i was expecting sumn more powerful from you on a subject like this... the emotion wasn't even conveyed this time around... almost like you were sidetracked with sumn else weighing on ya... either that or ya just wasn't in a recording mood... lyrics were ok but i feel ya coulda delivered a lot better than that with some projection and emphasis on certain parts...

whatevers eating at you man... just remember the title of this song..."Hold Ya Head"... shyt ain't that serious.... until the government gets involved!...holla
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Old 07-19-06, 12:41 PM   #26
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Listening..

Intro is dope and deep..Beat is raw. Troop comes in pretty nice, lyrics are nice, they fit the track well, quality is ehh, flow is good for the most part, just a few places where it seems a bit rushed..Lovin' the sampled hook..Whoa, Q comes in, and I swear to God I thought it was BIG. Man, that was weird. Anyways, he comes in nice, multies are nice, flow is hot like always, emotion in good in both verses, lyrics are dooooope I'm feelin' them..Overall, this shit is dope. And that's pretty much all there is to say.
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Old 07-19-06, 01:47 PM   #27
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intro was a lil long... i woulda only used the part where they started with the hip hop shyt...maybe a lil bit before that... love da marley sample...

thought you was troop at first... still kinda do in a way... not sure...lol

first verse was hot... feeling the lyrics... had a menacing type vibe to it... matched the beat well... quality can be upped ...a lot more... but other than that this shyt was good..

Q.. typical Q quality... so we ain't even gonna comment any further on that...lol... not ya best verse here, dawg... i was expecting sumn more powerful from you on a subject like this... the emotion wasn't even conveyed this time around... almost like you were sidetracked with sumn else weighing on ya... either that or ya just wasn't in a recording mood... lyrics were ok but i feel ya coulda delivered a lot better than that with some projection and emphasis on certain parts...

whatevers eating at you man... just remember the title of this song..."Hold Ya Head"... shyt ain't that serious.... until the government gets involved!...holla


^^Yea...ur exactly right...but, that's been resolved man...I'm ready to drop that fire.



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Old 07-19-06, 03:50 PM   #28
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Look out 4 some more AI collabs ya...

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Old 07-21-06, 05:14 PM   #29
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Old 07-22-06, 03:21 PM   #30
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What's hot:
Q's part for most part. flow, lyrics, delivery on point good shit
Luciano's lyrics and emotion

What's coo:
beat
Q's quality
Lucian's flow and delivery. gotta few points to brush up, most part good tho

What's not:
Lucianso's quality. lol man, can't understand few parts cu your quality so bad

OVerall tho track was a nice little joint. good shit to bump too. f'real... 8/10

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