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Old 07-25-06, 05:34 AM   #1
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intro hooks you in....its what its good for......

the verse comes in hot....boneish.....love it...
quality is okay, hook is boneish too.....

word its real good, you sound like low budget bone thugs n thats a very good compliment....
keep that shit up
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Old 07-25-06, 06:49 AM   #2
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intros cool

oh you've kicked in?...i didn't notice...wow @ the flow...dope man...like fast spits...plannin on doin one soon...delivery is nice lyrics straight man...

hook is a lil lacking imo...coulda worked better on that...

verse again keepin to the fast spit...lyrics are good...quality isn't as bad as some make out...i thought it'd sound MAD poor...but you've elevated from the last track i heard from you and i think that was LONG ago...

beats hot btw

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Old 07-25-06, 01:58 PM   #3
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Old 07-26-06, 12:40 PM   #4
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I gotta up this shiiiit
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Old 07-26-06, 02:44 PM   #5
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ayo. i heard this a while ago, but im just now givin some feedback..



flow was good i think. its a real tight flow if you polished it. right now, you can start the lil twista/bone thugs type ish, but at the end of ya bar, it falls off. if you got that shit down, flow would be crack, yahmean ?

lyrics were coo, didnt understand some of em. i IMO i think this was more of a flow showcase, than a track focused to lyrics. and thas coo, cause it was a good listen.


hook was coo - got repetative. but it was a nice lil blend type thing.

over all a solid track.

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Old 07-28-06, 07:12 PM   #6
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uppiinnnnnnnnn thisss
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Old 07-29-06, 05:11 PM   #7
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This is why i brung u 2 AI fam

Got that old Bone thugs type flow
delivery is on point
beat is hot and the chorus is on point

U gotta be in the top 3 best audio headz on Rv

Im bound 2 elevate now that u reppin AI wit me

One of the hardest songs ive heard on Rv bar Nun

10/10...

AI Muthafuckas...ya aint ready
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