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07-27-06, 08:45 PM | #16 | |||||
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lol..
this shit was flamez yo remind's me on some old school Eminem and Me being from Detroit...thats a compliment Flow was on point...delivery was amazing quality was that shit...im feelin the storyline...lol this shit is mad true...i was thinkin bout makein a song bout myspace but u beat me 2 it...maybe me and u can do a remix? 9/10..this shit was that Shit...
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07-27-06, 08:54 PM | #17 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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funny..... sound like one of them eminem songs when he just says dumb shit like that "my band" song
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07-27-06, 09:12 PM | #18 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
beat is appropriate for the theme of this track
ur voice is very familiar = good flow is good lyrics sorta em-ish pretty entertaining story line hook is lackluster slick track otherwise bro 1 |
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07-28-06, 07:06 AM | #19 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
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IP: 48F6 9AD1
hahaha...i got a myspace but i aint neva on there..neither are my pix!
*yeah listening now* beat is tight lol boy u ripped this shit...God girls deserve a lil mo respect mayne but w/e they caused it btw nice presence..right on point..flow was tight plust the multis...thats all i gatta say! keep it up
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07-28-06, 12:22 PM | #20 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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intros cool....1st verse is cool n shit...kinda funny, worded pretty nice...lol, idk about the topic tho...2nd verse is a lil funnier like how the storys going n shit, lol, hooks kinda cool..lol, good track man
*used 3 sided coin*
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07-28-06, 02:36 PM | #21 | ||||
Hell yeah
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this dope man, we should collab together once man, this the kinda song id do, the story is dope, lyrics are funny haha lmao, "I do webcam" word to this track, "Downloaded"
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07-28-06, 03:20 PM | #22 | |||||||
The Light
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IP: F94A DB0D
uppin..
check out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476 for me jay. for got to leave link earlier.. ay this myspace jam is hot yo haha. hall of famed and shit
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07-29-06, 06:00 AM | #23 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 6849 4C5F
toppin' it off.....anyone else?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-29-06, 03:04 PM | #24 | ||||
Ike
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lol i had to download this to listen to it...somethings fucked up about my comp and soundclick....
but im doin a "myspace song" as well...so i wanted to listen....but yea...lil bit diff concept i got going lmao.... beat is coo...shit is pretty funny man...lyrics are really simple...kinda on some wayy mainstream shit..... not bad though......
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07-29-06, 06:09 PM | #25 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 5782 58F1
I was waiting for this....lol.
You're killing this shit man. You own this style man, honestly. Flow was a little shakey in a spot or two, but pretty good for the most part. Your delivery was perfect for this. Hook was on point as well. This is so fuckin catchy man, for real. You did your fuckin thing man....good job I guarantee you get like fifty girls with this on their page by the end of the month...lol.
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08-01-06, 01:52 PM | #27 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
i want my ranking in soundclick to go higher....so im uppin for more looks haha
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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