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Old 07-27-06, 08:45 PM   #16
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lol..
this shit was flamez yo

remind's me on some old school Eminem

and Me being from Detroit...thats a compliment

Flow was on point...delivery was amazing

quality was that shit...im feelin the storyline...lol

this shit is mad true...i was thinkin bout makein a song bout myspace

but u beat me 2 it...maybe me and u can do a remix?

9/10..this shit was that Shit...
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Old 07-27-06, 08:54 PM   #17
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funny..... sound like one of them eminem songs when he just says dumb shit like that "my band" song
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Old 07-27-06, 09:12 PM   #18
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beat is appropriate for the theme of this track

ur voice is very familiar = good

flow is good

lyrics sorta em-ish

pretty entertaining story line


hook is lackluster

slick track otherwise bro



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Old 07-28-06, 07:06 AM   #19
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hahaha...i got a myspace but i aint neva on there..neither are my pix!

*yeah listening now*


beat is tight

lol boy u ripped this shit...God girls deserve a lil mo respect mayne but w/e they caused it btw


nice presence..right on point..flow was tight plust the multis...thats all i gatta say!

keep it up
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Old 07-28-06, 12:22 PM   #20
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intros cool....1st verse is cool n shit...kinda funny, worded pretty nice...lol, idk about the topic tho...2nd verse is a lil funnier like how the storys going n shit, lol, hooks kinda cool..lol, good track man
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Old 07-28-06, 02:36 PM   #21
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this dope man, we should collab together once man, this the kinda song id do, the story is dope, lyrics are funny haha lmao, "I do webcam" word to this track, "Downloaded"
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Old 07-28-06, 03:20 PM   #22
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uppin..

check out http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232476 for me jay. for got to leave link earlier..


ay this myspace jam is hot yo haha. hall of famed and shit
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Old 07-29-06, 06:00 AM   #23
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toppin' it off.....anyone else?
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Old 07-29-06, 03:04 PM   #24
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lol i had to download this to listen to it...somethings fucked up about my comp and soundclick....

but im doin a "myspace song" as well...so i wanted to listen....but yea...lil bit diff concept i got going lmao....

beat is coo...shit is pretty funny man...lyrics are really simple...kinda on some wayy mainstream shit.....

not bad though......
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Old 07-29-06, 06:09 PM   #25
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I was waiting for this....lol.

You're killing this shit man. You own this style man, honestly. Flow was a little shakey in a spot or two, but pretty good for the most part. Your delivery was perfect for this. Hook was on point as well. This is so fuckin catchy man, for real. You did your fuckin thing man....good job

I guarantee you get like fifty girls with this on their page by the end of the month...lol.
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Old 08-01-06, 01:52 PM   #27
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i want my ranking in soundclick to go higher....so im uppin for more looks haha
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