Voted For: Mystic.

I'ma give this one to Mystic, simply because he had more personals in there and harder hitting punches. This battle was a lil wack, but whatever..here's tha breakdown..

Kriptic-I felt you had an ight verse. Your intro was wack, and a intro is everything in a battle, it gets your audience into your verse and it gives em a lil feel of how the verse is gunna be. So wen you drop a punch or personal its guna be 2x better. I think you should work on that, as well as ending your verse. Body of your verse is where you really just pick at tha scab, but I felt in your body verse, you had more glorifying to yourself, then dissing your opponent. You would've easily took this one if you would've just dissed your challenger. Also, a lot of rhymes didn't drop like you probably wanted them too. I was confused a lil because of that, and it made some things not make sense, but overall, you still had a nice verse minus all the flaws. Stay up!

Mystic-You had a nicer verse that took this battle. I feel you hit harder with the punches and personals, just a lil. I can probably tell you got a lil more experience battling, that's why you came out on top. you had a better intro, wasn't the greatest in the world, but off the bat it was a nice personal that got your reader into the verse. Your body verse was nicer also, you had them good personals and a good unique style to the way you worded them. Not too much wordplay, I can see that this was quickly done, but it still got the job done. I don't like how throughout the majority of your verse, you stayed on the Nick Fletcher owning him. I feel that didn't need elaboration, just drop the personal, and move on to the next. Your ending bar was the best, and what really made you stand out. I was the best bar in your verse to me, suprisingly. Because it wasn't too flashy and it wasn't wack either, it was in between. And it got the job done. This was close, but I felt you came out slightly on top.

Overall-both of you are good, but I feel you guys did this quick. Probably spend a lil more time and really get at each other with the personals more. Punches weren't really high in this one, but whatever...Boring battle, but Mystic. came out on top.


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Voted For: Mystic.

breakdown:
structure:none yall shit is hella hard to follow
metas:i didn't spot any
Punches:tie
creativity:Mystic-you went into background detail i like dat
personals:Mystic
overall: my opinon
Mystic

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Voted For: Mystic.

Better all round verse i thought....Beter punches which hit harder...better flow and wordplay, nothing wrong with kriptic's verse but he didnt come as hard in this battle.

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