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Old 08-13-06, 07:34 PM   #16
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Hate how I judge, untill you saw what your honour wrote
You have a Soul of a Fighter... stomping on your throat
^naw, son.. shit just wasn't funny
D explain things?See, I have a habit of puttin' dudes in place
& if you want to know what's behind my name....it'll be euthanize
^un.. no! this didn't even rhyme.. lame.

vs.

that whack punchline? now i'm serioulsy not playing any games
cuz it looks like tha Alphabets had an accident, & fell over into your name.
^lolz. this wasn't really a punch, but it was funny.. aiight.
it's a shame, don't start none. there won't be no trouble
D tha 1st rapper to get his name from
some1 who couldn't spell 'n a crossword puzzle.
^aiight. i see what ur goin for, but not too harsh.

chea, pretty one sided here, if ya ask me. euth held his own in this battle. may have not been with strong punches, but they were enough to take the win again DNRGX. that guy though, sorry yo. u got some shotty punches and bad wordin, yo. work on both of those and u could get some where. i feel the 1-2 is a pretty good place to elevate. so look over better punches so u can get a better idea of a good punch.

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Old 08-13-06, 07:44 PM   #17
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Hate how I judge, untill you saw what your honour wrote
You have a Soul of a Fighter... stomping on your throat

could have been set up way better, but decent concept

that whack punchline? now i'm serioulsy not playing any games
cuz it looks like tha Alphabets had an accident, & fell over into your name.


okay, i think the idea of alphabets, inanimate objects, having an accident is pretty fuckin lame..but the concept of his name looking fucking retarded is cool

it's a shame, don't start none. there won't be no trouble
D tha 1st rapper to get his name from
some1 who couldn't spell 'n a crossword puzzle.

i don't do crossword puzzles...once again, decent attempt at nameplay

D explain things?See, I have a habit of puttin' dudes in place
& if you want to know what's behind my name....it'll be euthanize

doesn't even rhyme...only way it would rhyme is if you said..euthanaze..and that's just dumb



Vote - Euth for having 2 decent attemts..rather than 1
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Old 08-13-06, 08:51 PM   #18
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well Flow Intell isnt in the league yet so his vote wont count this week.
It is a tie.. meaning I cast the final vote.
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Old 08-13-06, 08:55 PM   #19
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Hate how I judge, untill you saw what your honour wrote
You have a Soul of a Fighter... stomping on your throat
Decent line.. wording couldve been better

that whack punchline? now i'm serioulsy not playing any games
cuz it looks like tha Alphabets had an accident, & fell over into your name.
lol this made me laugh
it's a shame, don't start none. there won't be no trouble
D tha 1st rapper to get his name from
some1 who couldn't spell 'n a crossword puzzle.
concept = great.. but wording = STRETCHED

D explain things?See, I have a habit of puttin' dudes in place
& if you want to know what's behind my name....it'll be euthanize
didnt rhyme.. and it wasnt excuted well.

D started good and then Euth evened it up with a dope line. D coulda won with a solid bar at the end but failed imo. Good battle though guys, keep it up

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Old 08-13-06, 08:56 PM   #20
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Euthanize wins (1-1)
DNGRX loses (0-2)
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