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Old 09-04-06, 08:11 PM   #16
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Aight im peepin now

Triples intro was nice...good quality of course

Spul you are gettin better.....your emotion and delivery is def. get better.......u are also coming up like crazy!.....lyrics are good....flow was really smooth.i like ya change ups man shits dope........

Hook was good....i like ya mixing on the hook
It was pretty dope

second verse again same shit still hot man.......it was pretty sick....quality was really good...

Triple on the outro i see........it was good.......lol i'm feelin it
this shits pretty damn hot man

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Old 09-05-06, 02:07 PM   #17
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Beat.... feeling it.... very hype...

Verse1:... you come in Very Energetic... grabed my interest on the jump...ya flowin this nicely...

Hook: "PUT THE HIP IN THE HOP"... lol... that shit jumped out at me... the way you rode that ... coo

Verse2: you got a lot of multis in this verse and the flow is more fluid up in here... some quotabels..."A hole in his chest the size of Paris' Pussy" .. WTF.. LMAO... when i heard that shit... i had to rewind the track son... lol...


you put it down SP...

8.5/10


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Old 09-05-06, 02:47 PM   #18
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beat sounds pretty cool
intros cool added a nice touch to the track
i think you could be turned up a little lyrically you came pretty nice
love the flow on the hook and delivery props on the hook
2nd verse same thing nice flow lyrically you came pretyt nice
i like the outro added nice touch
pretty cool track overall i liked it maybe just up the volume a little bit

rtf- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234545
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Old 09-05-06, 10:13 PM   #19
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^word props to all for the feed. really appreciate it. I RTF as well..
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Old 09-07-06, 03:44 PM   #20
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Anno is hit n miss with his beats. This one ain't bad. Intro is a lil extreme, WHOA ya vocals are low. Hook is straight, I like the beat change up and ya flow on it. (And I never been one for ya flow - so thats word) Verses are pretty decent, I would jus turn up ya vocals a bit. And I dunno why you wouldnt jus do ya own intro - if trip aint even have a verse, but meh - jus my $0.02. word.

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