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Old 09-08-06, 01:25 PM   #1
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I'll give you your first loss, but don't hate me for giving
Cuz a SPuL spit shines, while that's how you make your living
..this was niceness. good opener..
Never a fan of Da. The holes I rip in him are the largest
Cuz the only time I need D.A....
... is if this kid files for rape charges
..well, since he got the quote, it takes away from the punch, but aside from what he showed, i had never seen the punch, so it's still pretty cool to me..
We all know you're a dickrider. Don't deny, we know you lie
The good die young... and I damn sure can't live if D's on my side
..i've seen similar shit to this before. this was just blah anywhoz..
After this rippage, you'll be nobody. We all see your shit is meak
Actually, yea, you WILL be somebody...
... else's bitch next week
..lmaooozzz! this was funny, yo! good shit..
I be ownin' herbs daily. At that, you know I be a master
They'll have to evacuate Bush, the way I'm makin' D.C. a disaster
..this was coo.. not as harsh as it could've been, but straiight..
You best get aquainted to the ground, cuz my punches lower you to it
Cuz you didn't just take a step in the wrong direction...
...you packed up, and moved over to it
..i've seen punches like this, but not this concept used. so for the fresherness of(if thats a word), i'm a have to give this to ya. coolio..
When you're on the stage to flow, you never hurtin the foes
So fucka Curtain call, we just call for the curtain to close
..ROFLZ! hahahaha! this shit really made me laugh, yo..
This is the battle of the week. Nobody knows who'll get the win
But in the end datruth will be told...
.. to fuckin' NEVER rap again!
..lolz, this was cool. i've seen alot'a nameplays on DTH, but i don't think like this. if i'm wrong, show me. if not, i still thought this was cool..

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We all know ur a cheater, but this is hard to believe
Bitin' jokes is one thing...
... YOU FUCKIN' BIT FROM THE MOD OF THE LEAGUE!
..this was a statement and a bland statement at that. like i said homie, get creative with ur punches. u could'a made this into something witty..
And about what I've seen, I just wish these biters would die
In fact, ur the ONLY SPul that couldn't pull the wool over our eyes
..wtf!? if ur referin to Spul bein a "spul", then ur too late son. i done used this concept like, a week ago! lmfao! i see u may not like my battles, but u like my punches ..
I checked ya out, n' ya look too easy to son, bitch
But you DO have the hard drive to win...
... without the PC to run it
..WTF! u didn't use this did you? PLAYED NIGGA!!! c'mon sonz, get creative..
N' LOL @ U in a mack battle, you've never left any hurtin'
Cuz ya verse was a bunch of lines ur too afraid to say to women in person
..lolz! this was funny/dope. i liked this line..
Kempo should be thankin' me cuz yo my marketing's vital
But fuck helpin' the league...
... I just wanted ya to sign in to ease my road to the title
..eh, this was aiight! i've seen alot of punches similar to this before, but since u got the quote for it, i guess it gives some originality..
I'll win that title, ya doubt me? Shit, I don't care dude
I Can do it.. and we ALL want ya to put ya rhymes in there too
..a "can" line? didn't these get play'd out in FL! like, i swear i've seen u use somethin similar to this before..
You're all over the net, n' there's no tellin' where this bums been
Ur in 7 leagues...
... CUZ THATS HOW MANY IT TAKES FOR YOU TO GET JUST ONE WIN
..roflslfsaga!! nice! this was DOPERZ!..
You been around, n' ya where people have went for trainin'
You've shown off the art of rap...
... as a resemblence to some kiddie finger paintin'
..naw man! i been seein this shit too much lately. Aeral just dropped a punch like this in the LLL and used it better anywho. so, naw! not too hard hittin..

well, this was a pretty cool match up. Spul definately had the more consistant verse and didn't come as play'd or as bland as DTH. DTH's shit wasn't too bad, but he needs to get more creative with punches. statement punches can be good/funny sometimes, but the one i saw from u was meh! also, get more fresh punches man and more creative. that "hard drive" line made me wanna stop readin ur verse altogether man.. that shits been play'd since text began man(lolz). still, u had the best lines of the battle with that "7 leagues" line. too bad u couldn't be more consistant. as for Spul, u got this out'a consistancy. u had more harsher/fresher punches and u came in here wantin to win more, imo. so yea..

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Old 09-08-06, 04:55 PM   #2
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I'll give you your first loss, but don't hate me for giving
Cuz a SPuL spit shines, while that's how you make your living
After this rippage, you'll be nobody. We all see your shit is meak
Actually, yea, you WILL be somebody...
... else's bitch next week
When you're on the stage to flow, you never hurtin the foes
So fucka Curtain call, we just call for the curtain to close
This is the battle of the week. Nobody knows who'll get the win
But in the end datruth will be told...
.. to fuckin' NEVER rap again!

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N' LOL @ U in a mack battle, you've never left any hurtin'
Cuz ya verse was a bunch of lines ur too afraid to say to women in person
You're all over the net, n' there's no tellin' where this bums been
Ur in 7 leagues...
... CUZ THATS HOW MANY IT TAKES FOR YOU TO GET JUST ONE WIN


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Old 09-09-06, 02:41 PM   #3
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DTH asked me to give a break down so...



Spul -

I'm not doing quotables because I feel like lately quotables are the cheap way out (cause I did a lot of it myself voting lol) but honestly there was no STAND out line of your verse. Nothign hit very hard, lots of punches we're marginal. You had a couple cool lines, like the spit shine and datruth be told. but shit like the DA and DC and wrong direction line we're just blah...

DTH - Honestly you didn't fair much better but you had a couple hard hitters. The mack battle and 7 leauge lines we're nice. Other than that shit was marginal though.

I give it to DTH because i feel he had a more consistent verse.

Vote - DTH
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Old 09-09-06, 09:43 PM   #4
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4-3... uppin for more votes
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Old 09-10-06, 12:35 AM   #5
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yea some more votes would be cool ...
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Old 09-10-06, 04:43 AM   #6
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I'll give you your first loss, but don't hate me for giving
Cuz a SPuL spit shines, while that's how you make your living
You best get aquainted to the ground, cuz my punches lower you to it
Cuz you didn't just take a step in the wrong direction...
...you packed up, and moved over to it
^^ OH SHIT SON! That was hot
This is the battle of the week. Nobody knows who'll get the win
But in the end datruth will be told...
.. to fuckin' NEVER rap again!
I know this is played, but it was dope
(3)

vs.

We all know ur a cheater, but this is hard to believe
Bitin' jokes is one thing...
... YOU FUCKIN' BIT FROM THE MOD OF THE LEAGUE!
I checked ya out, n' ya look too easy to son, bitch
But you DO have the hard drive to win...
... without the PC to run it
^ I wanted to quote this but I can't cuz the concept is coo/fresh but it makes no damn sense when you think about it logically
N' LOL @ U in a mack battle, you've never left any hurtin'
Cuz ya verse was a bunch of lines ur too afraid to say to women in person
^LMFAO, Didn't really make sense when I thought about it, but when I first read it it made me laugh out loud literally and I get the point
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To be completely honest, I actually thought DTH was gonna take it this week, and I read both verses over twice, and I was on that hard judging shit. But it was close, and I thought DTH actually was gonna take it but man your shit was great until the end, the second half just fell apart. I didn't like the concepts/wording.

V/SPuL
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Old 09-10-06, 08:26 AM   #7
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I'll give you your first loss, but don't hate me for giving
Cuz a SPuL spit shines, while that's how you make your living

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And about what I've seen, I just wish these biters would die
In fact, ur the ONLY SPul that couldn't pull the wool over our eyes
N' LOL @ U in a mack battle, you've never left any hurtin'
Cuz ya verse was a bunch of lines ur too afraid to say to women in person

This battle was aight. Spul's verse was pretty average though, the spit shines bar was tight but apart from that I wasn't feeling anything else. DaTrus had the wool bar, that was dope and creative. The mack battle bar was nice as well, it hit hard. So I've got DaTrus taking this.

v/ DaTrusHurtz
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Old 09-10-06, 08:27 AM   #8
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DaTrusHurtz wins 6-5.

DaTrusHurtz wins (7-0)
SPuL loses (6-1)
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