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Old 09-19-06, 11:40 AM   #16
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Nigga you stay in e-style while the whole roster is claused
I'll whore you so bad it'll turn your soul clap into fuckin applaus
N yeah i peeped your sound click nigga that was a bad choice
Til i listned to your shit n found out you was the wit the squeeky voice
This cat want to be known as trey method aka nickelz, gay
So ill murder you worse then your avy n you'll have no say
Kid your a bitch i diss your sig and your ass removes it
I dont blame you, but why put somethin worse in like Your music
This a chyper kid not a fucking prewrite station maraton
dropped 26 lines and you still made the shit sound wrong
I stopped readin your shit after the 4th line, it really sucks
So find something else your good at, eh nah nevermind your fucked
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Old 09-19-06, 08:36 PM   #17
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Fam lol, stop posting now, you'll never be an infamous writer.
..^^ with that shit? Ain't no way in hell you winning the cypher!
U should've stopped makin ya rhymes up, and came in as a biter.
instead, you think of rap as a cigarette. .
....and your pen as the lighter?
Please... nobody believes you, we all know ya stuff is just fake.
...even in "Matilda", you're only known for grubbin on cakes!
I'll verbally harass you, from my words, watch this sucka get raped.
you fag... you prolly get horny just from touching some grapes!
How dare you fuck with a great? False in all the stuff u create.
only time you 'lifting iron'.... is if you pumping some weights!
Dude, you'll never make it, so keep tryna get an easy win
cause only "Bruce" we'll see on stage... is that fat comedian!
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Old 09-19-06, 08:45 PM   #18
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Originally Posted by Trey MethodZ
To Bruce.....

Dude that was weak,now its time for me to get at him
fo'real drop 20 lines of shit....dont mean you'll get a cypher win
Son i dont need an award or even to be call'd a vet
you'll get n award for droppin the most in the cypher wit no wins yet
i can't hate this thread is for practice to get better
n all of us like that your gone but wish it was....forever
i'll murda, this punk so he'll meet the grave
beatin bruce wit the bat man till his face is incave'd
i'm on the fast track to a win...i get'em in bunchs
he's on the fast track to rush....the speed of writing his punchs
dude im not the only one that'll cause ya some fear
the only RL you ever Rock'd...was puttin on some gear
Sit down think of fresh concepts,personals jus take ya time
this threads for elavatin...first atleast learn to get ya shit to rhyme
idk if i'm makin sense but arn't battles suppose to be cut throat
is it trey? or dude tried to diss me n start's off by callin me dope
i hope...he can talk after im done wit his jaw
everyones tellin me its not normal....to fix cavity's wit a chainsaw
kill'em raw,givem to the boys so ya'll can get rid of this flamer
they'll leave bb decaded in a bag witout a butterfinger disclaimer
i can tell you speed ya shit...ppl waitin! quick spit for them
so i'll Rush Wordz out his mouth like they both ran train on him
ya shits weak,you aint got no respect thats it dude
funny how he acts big when noone's ever heard of you
I'll send shots to ya body...the ruger's size of a boot
the hole in ya chest'll be big enough for the whole site to hula hoop

Yeaaaaa



we gone see who the pussy when the slugs pitchin
and don't start hittin me up on aim.. i got enough bitches
honestly, anyone pay attention to somethin he wrote?
gotta be the first dude wit a MILLION lines & none of em dope
wait, i think i remember you from RB, maybe.. losin, no winnin
matter fact i think you were in LLL.. the Jr. division
and i can't believe you thought that i was worse, huh?
i joined that league and won a SEASON my FIRST month
lame lines, hey guy, i got another story, hear me bro
once upon a time.. i battled a cat w/ the same lines a yr ago
nameplays and all, i swear cats is postin that lame stuff
god damn rock fans, i thought Snoop told ya to step ya game up
look, i'm whoopin these geeks
i woulda posted a while ago, but his verse put me to sleep
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Old 09-20-06, 12:00 PM   #19
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Old 09-20-06, 10:46 PM   #20
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Kid your wack, your like flem in my throat, hack
Ill spit you out and devour you
Cause this kids a contender, but the belt you still lack
Ill come wack agaisnt you and still fucking eat your verse
Its like a horror movie with your lines
.......................Each one keeps gettin worse and worse
Bitch'd out in the cypher, so show us some fight huh
Only thing you've been good for is exposing a biter
This kid will never reach the top, thats a real given
Cause you'll hit rock bottom, Like stalone in driven
This kid air aint real, n your shit none of us feel
You couldnt be a heavy weight
.................If i fed ya face some fucking steel
Ya boast and brag about bein in an unactive crew yup
So don't take it personal
.........................when i tell you to shut the fuck up
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Old 09-21-06, 10:14 PM   #21
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oh my, let me tell you why ya chicks a threat
i told her a week ago.. NEVER to post that pic on the internet
see, i get it in places you can't imagine, & what dude?
you found that in the box under her bed.. you find the handcuffs too?
so now you don't know that i dont be lyin and shit
i don't know whats uglier, you stretched lines or your bitch
i know you cryin a bit, i wonder how the taste is
at least now ya know ya girls pussy aint wet.. her FACE is
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Old 09-21-06, 10:48 PM   #22
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Rofl kid your a joke... i wont even bother with a bunch of lines ill just drop like 1 or 2 for your ass

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i don't know whats uglier, you stretched lines or your bitch

First you talk about fuckin her, Now she ugly huh
Then i guess that means
Your dick willin to get inside anything bru
Your ass is wack and i wont waste my time on you
n lookin at your wack LBL record proves your carrer is threw
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Old 09-21-06, 10:57 PM   #23
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lol, you tryna say rush lingo and got no taste?
i guess you never realized that PUSSY AINT GOT A FACE
maybe though, i won't tryna be cruel but dude..
i must admit that the exception to the rule is you.
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Old 09-22-06, 12:08 AM   #24
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rush...ha

Werd thats true...pussy aint got no face dude
so i guess you dont mind....that mad heads be hittin you
aint got no crew...to protect this puss when i mak'em bleed
but you did make all the dope heads dip...at the period you join'd the league
i'm cuttin ya throat so you can't breath, in a slit situation
so i can leave rush gettin the type of neck...cockblockers wont be hatin
i'll be in the back waitin, to wipe ya off the story page
programing my machine of a mind...to empty the rage out on the stage
Fill'em up and end this fuckin story
mount rush more bullets..than gun shops at inventory
or bring'em in the woods...help he'll be shoutin
push'em near the edge an mount rush off the fuckin mountian
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Old 09-22-06, 05:35 AM   #25
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^^^
Damn dude i didnt know you was gay like that
So ill puncure a whole in ya lung an make ya line go flat
Faggot ill kill you, murder you, however you want it
N if you was ever noticed, it'd be the gay guy from the comics
This bitch throws more arlitary punches then anything
Atleast well get a mental picture of what your future will bring
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push'em near the edge an mount rush

I'll copy your style and clap shots in ya face
While your ass is still searching for rush's embrace
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Old 09-22-06, 12:15 PM   #26
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^^ wow ur awful

my bullets burn ur body n shit will never hurt me
i round you off so much, its like trying to divide 13
you'll lay ina grave early, I never show mercy to start
ya you dropped glocks....after my bullets hit ur heart
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Old 09-22-06, 01:37 PM   #27
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wow....your a funckin homo flash and you suck...

lampejo is the fag...thats a wack bitch
his sig forgot to show his favorite part..the dudes dick
your useless, i'll beat you up ruthless
leavin him toothless, chain, shirt missing an bootless
ya'll dont get it twist'd i aint hatin on this damn bitch
but hows dude gonna be irish white....wit a username thats spanish
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Old 09-22-06, 02:05 PM   #28
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Bruce Bogtrotter
Kid your leagues dope, n if you believe that your wrong
Cause gettin head from sobe
..................................Is the only time that Kempson
Artistik is dope but your whole carrer has just been a joke
'S why every time you get to the top of LLL
..............................................You fall short and choke
Famous was ill last cypher the way he dropped his bars
So i'll smash your face with a hammer
............................N leave your face full of scars
Yeah i come wack, n with a style that is straight old
But no matter how bad my bars look
......................They'll never look as bad as untold
I'll diss the whole roster of this pitiful site and LBL
So like kemp's dying league
...........................This whole site is going to hell



why the fuck would you diss kemp? he's the dude giving out wins
while were in a league of our own.. your just fuckin hope'n to get in
then you try n get on me, left rb cuz u couldn't make a name for yaself?
so u come to rv hope'n the legend archive will fucking aid in some help :/
i'll disrespect every bar u drop, cuz the truth 's your lame bitch
n atleast the kid quotes u dissed.. name is halfway famous
i'll sum ya last two bar's up with 1 punch, so dude just sue me
cuz your name sounds like JIM CAREY doing a rip-off EAGLES movie




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i'll hold a gun to these kids, and slam ya faces
s'when i scatter BB's.. its his body parts in random places
bruce ur a joke! 'n don't ever mention me again, cause kid i'm a boss, yo
i mean, just because me dick came out ya mouth..
..doesn't mean my name has to also
i'm one to follow cause i set trends when i drop shit 'n stunt rhymes
but u got loads of followers to.. just look at ALL the wack fucks in front lines
dude ur losing, ur a soft bitch whose punches could never move me
'n if bruce almighty.. then it's obvious why i never watched the movie
ur wack as shit, so it'll be easy for me to bash this prick
cuz if ur Willis to win.. then this Bruce'll die harder than the action flick


you get's no love, n when art blast's you'll catch some slugs
my dick, my nut's n my fame..
.. well your on all of thee above
your pussy whipped, n i've seen ya bitch hittchu wit a right n a jab
cuz i'd engage you in physical combat.. but your fiance already has :/


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Originally Posted by Rush Lingo
i could've waited, but i'm anxious to drop now
i left for a minute, & yall try taking my spot now?
not now, but i know yall lovin the fact
that, lingo is back, whether he rusty of whack
right now he, hot as hell, still carryin weight
on a level you ain't.. my comparisons great
i'm hard as boulders and bricks, i'm foldin ya quick
none of yall real.. shit, even Untold is a myth
& instead of kemp making lines sacred, instead,
he'd rather base his entire career off'a makin a thread
shit, i'm eatin you cats, straight beatin you cats
faggot you RUN a league.. and you're ONLY decent at that
you don't please me, so be E-ZAY
i'm the mahfuckin cipha king, but got nothin to do with DJ's

they thought i was dead.



rush lingo, who? i see this bitch incists on coming back for more
but what can i say bout him.. that hasn't already been said before
we aint THINK you were dead rush, cuz dope you have about a ounce
cuz EXPO getting banished from RB.. n getting active here dosen't count
i love ya second bar, cuz oh my god that shit was so true
cuz rusty & wack really best describes you
's funny how u talked shit last time, n you were down in the votes
n loose lip's sink ships.. so i fucking hope u drown in the boat
i mean come on yall, who's idea was to make this kid mod of the damn forum
when he sig's the LBL.. but basically hasn't really done shit forum


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you talk shit rush...but we can see right through the trash
So take the League out your sig, before we all look ass
bitch, I expect your return, I knew the hurricanes wouldn't stop
but awaited you with open arms----->from the last time I ripped em off
If you was sick, you'd caugh...but never on the micraphone
So like the MLB when they saw jordan play, just leave the mic alone


learn how to rhyme kid, cuz you need to kiss your ass good rittence
n everyone kno's you can stretch WORDZ out to a SENTENCE
ok one more bar man, n i swear this is my last rhyme
wait..
weren't you the dude that help's me win this shit last time?!?


aha... fag... thx for being my punch dummy


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dissin on dude cuz he's comin back.. u should and heres why
this league is gay for how much it wants to kiss u.... good bye
oh u rippin arms off? u hard?.. where the fuck u goin kid
next time u come wit open arms.. first come wit some deoderent
what u droppin is str8 shit son.. i neva seen any worse
while i be str8 pile drivin just by chauffeurin ya verse



we can go round for round bitch, so get hit witta round kick
so u'll take a beat down.. like deleting your shit offa soundclick
my wordplay is crazy.. with that said this bitch done
cuz every man has to PP.. n u just hope that u'll see one

FAGGET


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Untold

You a boss kid? Shit if you a boss this whole sites shit
N your lines more stretched n played
.................................................t hen your girls pussy bitch
You tryed to match me with 10 lines but your was wack
You stay commin wit them gay jokes
While sucking Mim off and pounding 9th from the back.
N your so dope that ill even qoute one of your lines for ya

N yeah we know thats true
Cause all you seem to do is drop shit. Ha
Im diss a kid who bites names off an even wacker site
So fuck you have a nice day
Heres a fucking cookie bitch, Take a bite



won't really waste my time with you, cuz everything i say is tru n..
what more is there to say bout ya closer then what u need to stop doing



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wheres the fight, im lookin around...not a dude in sight
so i'll break out the lamp......an use his blood for light
his option is to bite, he can't arguy knowin im right
that lamp light'd over more words........than readin at nite
your a joke on this site, everyone knows this in-deed
the red flashes will see all over the wall'll have....nuthin to do wit speed



your not the truth kid, n 's sad, your far from invisible
so fuck ™..
^^ yea i thought i'd keep that original
i know your indie nile kid, but the thruth's your wack n it fit's..
for you to be LBL's anchor.. 's the reason they sinking n shit


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Are you joking man? Fucking noob, i'm hoping that
Cuz i've beat more people then the amount of posts you have!
It's hopeless man, I rock the 12 gauge, so lemme give you a hint
Back off now, we all know BB guns barely even give you a pinch
S'like heavymetal and iron maiden how ya work, sickenin son
Cuz he'll always give a headbang, Bruce is known for taking a Dickinson
You're dirty, nasty, disgusting, you're rotten dawg
And named yaself Bogtrotter cuz you always trott in the bog



let's play childhood games.. my gunz drawn n you about to get handled
i'll be the cowboy on the horse.. indian you'll be the guy to get trampled
my wordplay crushes whores to the floor, i'm to sick n ya wack fag
i kno summer brings the pussy out.. but who let this cat out the damn bag?


FUCKING ASS UNTOLD JUST USED A BB GUN PUNCH


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Fam lol, stop posting now, you'll never be an infamous writer.
..^^ with that shit? Ain't no way in hell you winning the cypher!
U should've stopped makin ya rhymes up, and came in as a biter.
instead, you think of rap as a cigarette. .
....and your pen as the lighter?
Please... nobody believes you, we all know ya stuff is just fake.
...even in "Matilda", you're only known for grubbin on cakes!
I'll verbally harass you, from my words, watch this sucka get raped.
you fag... you prolly get horny just from touching some grapes!
How dare you fuck with a great? False in all the stuff u create.
only time you 'lifting iron'.... is if you pumping some weights!
Dude, you'll never make it, so keep tryna get an easy win
cause only "Bruce" we'll see on stage... is that fat comedian!


the kid Famous is the worst, so chill n get took for all that ya worth
i'd say invest in stocks..
but we can't even Quota punch from ya verse


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^^ wow ur awful

my bullets burn ur body n shit will never hurt me
i round you off so much, its like trying to divide 13
you'll lay ina grave early, I never show mercy to start
ya you dropped glocks....after my bullets hit ur heart



kid stfu, i'm the best here, peep game cuz kno what i'm about
n 's like a walkie talkie baseball game how i'm alway's puttin ROGER OUT
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Old 09-22-06, 03:05 PM   #29
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Rofl damn art tryna win the cyper huh?


Blah

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but hows dude gonna be irish white....wit a username thats spanish


Bitch it aint spanish its portugese you idiot
Now im not calling you stupid
Im just saying you have no fucking wit
Tryna drop multi's to help out you sad punches
N i'd say your a gay fuck
But your bars against rush prove our hunches.
Yeah ima white indian, irish n porguesse kid
But in one week, i've accomplished more then you ever did

Blah i suck yeah diss me some more, you stupid whore
N my dick so good it'll never let you down til i slam you to the floor
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Old 09-22-06, 03:33 PM   #30
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Quote:
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let's play childhood games.. my gunz drawn n you about to get handled
i'll be the cowboy on the horse.. indian you'll be the guy to get trampled

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=296199
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let's play childhood games.. my gunz drawn n you about to get handled
i'll be the cowboy on the horse.. indian you'll be the guy to get trampled


If u wanna get ideas for concepts, my verses are gold mines
I'm about to the win the title...
... ur trying to win the cypher with old lines
I didn't want to expose u, we're friends, see i'm just tryin' to score
This shit's a catch 22........lines that you've already written before
Stfu Lamp, ur just as bad, faggot ur fucked up n' odd
N' how the fuck do u not know how to quote lines if u used to be a mod?
But u had 1 true bar, that's cool, i admire ya timin' ya geek
You HAVE accomplished a lot...no one else could post that many wack lines in a week
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