Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
ehh to simple, could of worded it better to make it harsher
Kids a gay.. and ill prove it as i break his fuckin hips
This kid dont suck tits.. he just forever suckin on his lips
again, too simple
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
nah, maybe with some wordplay or someting to make it harsher it'd be coo
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
ehh decent
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
ha not bad, this was pretty coo
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
blah, too simple, not harsh enough
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
ehh kind of weak seeing as he won a second one early this yr. so fake personal really
Wack rhymes never comin up..they all beat up on the floor,why?
Cuz ya whole styles dragon...and it doesn't bring fire... ...or fly
ehh, wording was off
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
ehh what are you saying? SPuL is half black or something I thought? but ehh
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground
decent
Kid i dont know why you requested this battle, its not like its fair
N your ass could only bring the pain if it pays you cab fare
ok

Decent verse at best. Had a lot of shit that could of worked, but struggled with wording. The line em up right was actually cool line. But other than that really wasn't likin' much of it.

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
haha this was nice
I'm doper then you, kid. I hate to sound nonchalent
But you're wack, F plus..
.. that's what ^^ your rhymes are graded in talent
ehh. one letter nameplays are real ehh so didn't like this too much
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
not bad
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
nah this wasn't good
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
ehhh
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
cool, decent
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
ehhish
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
pretty cool

Even though you went fewer lines i feel you were more consistent. Not that great a verse here tho. Just more consistent than flash. But it was decent at best.

Overall, this was ehh battle to me. Both didn't come that great, flash had one line that was coo, and SPuL had 2 or 3. He was also a lil more consistent than Flash. this my honest opinion so don't any of you bitch if you think my breakdowns were harsh. but ehh SPuL got this

v/SPuL

Umm no you suck and your vote doesnt count cause hmm lets see.. hate votes.. but yeah spul is indian not black.

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Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground

vs.

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble

Wow, I'm pretty shocked here... Spul I think u underestimated ur opponent. If u had matched the number of lines he wrote, u woulda won for sure, but you took a risk writing fewer lines. I was surprised, u didn't really attack his pic other than ur opener and closer.. the rest was more generic shit. And a lot of that stuff was rather bland, way below your standards. Lamp, u came pretty inconsistent, but u had some pretty cool lines, prolly the best verse i've seen from u.. i obviously loved the line about me, haha, that was tight. If I were voting on pure consistency and he matched u, likely you woulda lost, but he didn't, and you had a good amount of quotables so I got you takin' this.

Vote - Flash

Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
lol, this was "ok"
Kids a gay.. and ill prove it as i break his fuckin hips
This kid dont suck tits.. he just forever suckin on his lips
Ya, I used a bar like this so much better in KORV and no one quoted it, -_-
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
lol, you coulda made this soooo much better though
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
LOL! man that's the only good punch so far but you coulda made this better too
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
nah, wack
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
eh, ok
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
LOL! Fucking sick i aint never seen a bar used like this
Wack rhymes never comin up..they all beat up on the floor,why?
Cuz ya whole styles dragon...and it doesn't bring fire... ...or fly
nah, PLAYED
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
LOL!K!NK This was sick too, nice personal
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground
nah, forced, and not even good
Kid i dont know why you requested this battle, its not like its fair
N your ass could only bring the pain if it pays you cab fare
nah, wack also

You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
6

vs.

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
lol, coo concept but the wording was wacked
I'm doper then you, kid. I hate to sound nonchalent
But you're wack, F plus..
.. that's what ^^ your rhymes are graded in talent
LOL stupid... it's CHALANT, and it's pronounced SHA-LAWNT so it didn't rhyme, but this was still cool
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
this was coo
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
omg, you coulda worded this concept so much better, but it's wack like this
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
lol, simple but cool
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
LOL, sweet.. aint seen this wordplay used yet
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
waaaaaaaaack
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
LOL! you know how much better it woulda been if you flipped him calling you indian? like wow, said something like "So you wanna say i'm indian, fuck being humble, i'll hit ya temple so hard the ones my familly pray in will crumble" as an example...

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
6

So it's even, but SPuL came so much better with the lines I didn't quote compared to Lamps lines I didnt quote...

v/SPuL

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Iight thanks uppin

One question though... if my bars was so much sicker, you know the ones you quoted.. how is it that you even quoted his bars that you called good but wack at the same time?

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Kid ya dirty so watch ya hygene or you'll end up dead
C'mon honestly man, is that a hat or something growin out ya head
...Um....kinda weak...
Kids a gay.. and ill prove it as i break his fuckin hips
This kid dont suck tits.. he just forever suckin on his lips
....Weak....
And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
.....Nice...
You get girls... huh who you kiddin, your face crusty like whoa
N the only time you get your freak on... is openin up a sideshow
...Aii...
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
...Decent..
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
..Good...
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago
/....lol....
Wack rhymes never comin up..they all beat up on the floor,why?
Cuz ya whole styles dragon...and it doesn't bring fire... ...or fly
...Nice!!!....
Despise this fag? Nah...just lookin at ya pics enuff to realize ya wack
..And you look a hell of alot like T.I....except T.I.'s black
/....Weak...
N kid's say i played you like zelda the way i box you around
while i take this look alike linkin park his ass underground
....Decent...
Kid i dont know why you requested this battle, its not like its fair
N your ass could only bring the pain if it pays you cab fare
...aii...

Overall you had like a few good bars and some nice bars but your overall verse was jus mainly Aii nuttin realy specail Xcept the lines on which i specified "Nice" on I feel that yu mostly had a filler verse

spul
Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
...corny...
I'm doper then you, kid. I hate to sound nonchalent
But you're wack, F plus..
.. that's what ^^ your rhymes are graded in talent
concepts kinda played...
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
...Damn Thats Nnice..
You're wack, you ain't gon win this league. I ain't playin' dude
So don't bother to peace out the puzzle..
... just realize thats ^^^^^^^^ that's what they sayin' to you
.....LOl funny...
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
...Blah/....
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
...Decent...
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
Damn....
I'll call your face my punching bag, I'm vicious. Fuck being humble
I'll send such a huge blow to your temple...
... the ones in India'll start to crumble
....LOL....damn....

overall i see you focused alot on wordplay which isnt bad bcuz you supplied solid punchez to go alonbg i feel that your verse overall was better than Lampejo. bcuz you came with more solid punchez and stronger pucnhez and better wordplay and a little less fillers so

my v/ Spul .

Nice battle should get some nice qoutes in the mag

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And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear

Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right
This kids a hindu fag... so go back to fuckin animal in your stall
N ill leave your face croocked like the frame hangin on your wall
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago

cool verse....some lines were mad obvious like u called him TI...but like it wasn't a diss you know what i mean...some other lines were blah but i like the other lines the ones i quoted they made me laugh

spul


22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference


didn't like the beginning at all man ^^ those line were not really fluid and shit was ok...coulda been done better the middle got better those two lines i quote were nice man...but everything else was err...i thought you wanna gonna kill this but i think you didn't come as hard as usual...left the door open...flash had alittle more quotables

vote-flash

And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
Lampejo fear this hoe? No... we know you only appearin dope
And I'll say congratulations on that tourny... from two years ago

Vs

Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches
22 lines? shit, 16 was more my taste
I wanted to dumb it down a bit...
... but your verse beat me to the chase
Flash is like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference

v//Spul
Pretty obvious choice. Flash had some ok shit but not enough good punches to win.

Iight thanks for the votes yall.. Uppin

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wrong. 4-3 me. Rush's vote counts ask Kempo. Remember your vote against me in DTH battle? I said you can't vote before you voted, I said your vote was a hate vote, and kempo still counted it. so that'd be bullshit if rush's vote doesn't count. and a BIG lmao @ you editing in, I don't want rush and serb to vote AFTER rush voted.

4-3 me upp

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Flash-And yeah kid in this battle its on you that im smellin fear
N the onlything bigger then DTH winnin streak... is your left ear
Ima land so much punches on you, be prepared to take flight
Cause spul verse is like his barber...he cant line em up right

SPuL-Flip the picture upside down cuz those nostril's are alarmin'
And you'll find a replica of the hole, the US found Saddam in
Ain't no time for kiddy games, son... ain't got no time to waste
So while you rock, paper, scissors... I'll just throw them at your face
Fall back, kid, now listen, I'm serving knuckles for your lunches
So if you are what you eat.. check flash's next verse for my punches

Nice battle here bioth came nicee i gotta give it to Spul tho slioghty for havin for quotables in my opinion
Vote-Spul

word thanks for voting 5-3 me.....

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actually i aint edit that in i edited the spot for my links homo..

But anyways i talked to kemp earlier about that and he said it doesnt count... and shit when you battle DTH? you been outa this league for awhile. so i aint remember shit

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