I listened and it sounds like you're rushing your flow. It's weird, you're offbeat. You'll say something super quick, sorta like you're not relaxed or whatever. Slow down and don't rush to get your words out. Get back at me if that don't make much sense.

seen seen.

I didnt write to a beat ya see. Just got a freehouse got the nearest beat and recorded. get me.

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Ight...flow is off. Quality is pretty coo. I like the beat choice, dont think it went with the concept of the song. You have a lot of energy and feeling into this track. That's a big plus, vocals are a lil too loud tho. I kinda like the track, just flow is off. Lyrics are meh, not all that, but they get through. I like how you started the first verse, it was on, then you feel off.

Second verse, I think this is better. Good rhyming, even more feeling in this one. Enegery is the same. You was more on beat. But, there something about it that aint too hot.
Not too much to say about this track. It's pretty good. Sounds like some Def Poetry Jam shit. Big props on this one tho daubs.

5/10 for me.

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