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Old 10-15-06, 04:42 PM   #16
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Old 10-15-06, 05:05 PM   #17
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I dont know why people said they didn't like the beat

IT was pretty hot

I'm feelin the intro.....

Flow - I like ya swagga on this.....sounds really sick......I think you should've turned the vocals up A LIL BIT......but I think what you have is pretty catchy on here......I think the ny swagga on this beat is hot

Hook - Hook is pretty tight creative and catchy

I like the way you saying ya words its new....u could really evolve this style...sounds new

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Old 10-15-06, 06:19 PM   #18
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Old 10-16-06, 02:19 PM   #19
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yup this was coo i like tbeat deliever was there for all the verses the only thing was is that i kinda didnt like the repition of some of the words hook was mixed coo as well overall nice drop man hit me up fo a collab n shit
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Old 10-16-06, 04:15 PM   #20
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alright.
my internet was fuckin up yesterday. crashed.
then i called internet providers n they helped me out.

ok anyways.

i like this beat man. its diffrent from ur type of shit but still works wit it.
alright here u come first verse. i like that. good flow.
nice lyrics. real laid back. the chorus is tight too. jus that background sound is kinda strange =\. but its good. the 1,2 1,2 shit. its cool.
2nd verse. still pretty tight. gots a good flow.
overall good track mang. i like it. kinda short tho
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Old 10-16-06, 07:15 PM   #21
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this song is okay....better be some intro thing or somethin....i just dont think you had the energy you normally bring to a track man.....i felt it pick up halfway thru the song but at first it didnt seem like authentic energy....in my opinion you've gotten better your quality has too, but it seems as if some of your old problems were hinting through....still not a bad song but with what ive heard from you lately....its just seems like it shoulds been more
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Old 10-17-06, 01:46 PM   #22
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I feel u dawg but im switchin the shit up nah mean, its gon be a lot more laid back but still wit that delivery but the beat didnt bring that out and i thought ttd be better laid back n chilled
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Old 10-20-06, 07:55 AM   #23
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where te hell do u get ur beats from?...shit is tight as hell!

..hook is iight just needed a lil more alibs

...u had some tight flows i loved the switch on the 2nd verse,your alibs and stuff just came across right....hahaha the lyrics are beginng to inspire me a lil....gd job mayne!wheneva ur mixtape is done plz dont hesitate to lemme know..i'm catching a copy!

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