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Old 10-27-06, 06:00 AM   #1
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No bother throwing a big one, a small hit is all I need,
'Cause the only kids hooked on 'Phonics..
.................................still gotta learn how to read.
--I've seen hooked on phonics punches before but this works as a nameplay as well plus it was funny.
Played and nonsence lines? Kid is far from near the mark,
So I'll kill Kenny more than the bastards from South Park.
--the setup was good but i felt the wording was bad in the punch.

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You're a cowherd, need proof that u a stink bitch
Just readin those first 2lines....I Red Bull shit
--nah, i really wasnt feeling this
Love to see things from your view,
But I cant get my head that far up my ass
So someday u'll find yaself...then wish ya hadn't dont that!!!
--lol...did you text JOKE to 35050, for the joke of the day......WACK

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Old 10-27-06, 02:35 PM   #2
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Red Bull

No bother throwing a big one, a small hit is all I need,
'Cause the only kids hooked on 'Phonics..
.................................still gotta learn how to read.
^This was a nice punch
^ Played and nonsence lines? Kid is far from near the mark,
So I'll kill Kenny more than the bastards from South Park.
^ROTFLFMAO


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Ken'Pho

You're a cowherd, need proof that u a stink bitch
Just readin those first 2lines....I Red Bull shit
^Cool i liked it
Love to see things from your view,
But I cant get my head that far up my ass
So someday u'll find yaself...then wish ya hadn't dont that!!!
^wording sucked, and brought this down


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Old 10-27-06, 06:22 PM   #4
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No bother throwing a big one, a small hit is all I need,
'Cause the only kids hooked on 'Phonics..
.................................still gotta learn how to read.
^^decent
You're a cowherd, need proof that u a stink bitch
Just readin those first 2lines....I Red Bull shit
^^played
Love to see things from your view,
But I cant get my head that far up my ass
So someday u'll find yaself...then wish ya hadn't dont that!!!
^^terrible... and what the fuck? structure is wow
^ Played and nonsence lines? Kid is far from near the mark,
So I'll kill Kenny more than the bastards from South Park.
^^
decent

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Old 10-29-06, 01:09 AM   #5
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Dude, its obvious red bull took this...

No bother throwing a big one, a small hit is all I need,
'Cause the only kids hooked on 'Phonics..
.................................still gotta learn how to read.

Okay, not the best wording, iunno...

^ Played and nonsence lines? Kid is far from near the mark,
So I'll kill Kenny more than the bastards from South Park.

LMAO!!!

VS

You're a cowherd, need proof that u a stink bitch
Just readin those first 2lines....I Red Bull shit

Meh, reds name is played out

Love to see things from your view,
But I cant get my head that far up my ass
So someday u'll find yaself...then wish ya hadn't dont that!!!

ummmm? started great, ended....horribly

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Old 10-29-06, 04:19 PM   #6
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Red Bull WINS 1-0
Ken' Pho LOSES 0-1
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