I love you too M Eazy

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Hahaha...bro, why'd you come back in here? hahaha

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^^Preciate the feedback...and yea, I listened to this track 100000 times...The quality doesn't allow u to hear the nuances in my delivery...And, the flow on the first verse does come off chopped in spots...but, the 2nd verse is rockin...LOL

Also, I'm def. gonna get better until the day I die. But, note that I'm in the process of re-inventing my flow/schemes/style. Have you heard some of my old work as Tha Q? Bro...I'm not braggin, but I can hold my own against anyone on RV without a doubt.









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Same reason you did

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WTF did you do to these people Q. You're getting gang banged in every thread i see you in now.

The beat was ok. The Quality was meh...but what the fuck am i gonna say about quality right?

The flo on both were nice actually. I like your flo it's original to me 95% of the time. The only thing i hate is when you do that run jump and stop thing then have to get going again. Alot of people consider that flo but i don't. I'm for smoothness though...

Your chorus was dope to me. Anybody who hates this chorus...probably hasn't or doesn't want to take the time to feel it. Sometimes people hate on auto pilot with out knowing it. Shit i do it sometimes. That we fly high. I thought that shit was wack till i found my self yelling "Balllin". Realized i just hated cause i hated him.

Anyways i'm not going to go in to my favorites, be easier to say what i didn't like which was the fertilizer stink line. But i hate the word stink for some weird ass reason. Just an ugly word. That's it.

Yup yup.

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^^Preciate the feed...But, what's run jump and stop?






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Stop sayin ya name on the intro so much... Once or twice is enough bro... Was that you having a convo with yourself aswell?...heh... Vocals could be a little clearer, it sounds like youve reduced the reverb with some filter.. Prolly could just use an EQ tweak..

Lyric style reminds me of old andre 3000 which is fucken awesome...props for that. One problem I did have which is most likly only personal preference was that your style is real metaphorical on this track n at times its hard to understand what your getting at with some lines as your listening, could be a little more direct with what your saying rather than expressing yourself somewhat abstract like that.

Hook was aiight, I feel as though this track could have benefitted from using a singer n more beat variations during the chorus and verses to emphasise certain lines n sort of lose that loop feel to it a bit.

But overall, I enjoyed listening.. If you can fix the clarity on your vocals just a tad this track would be killer... Good shit.......

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When someone does a flo and comes up to a word and they stop with emphasis and then go and stop again. The spaces bug me. I really couldn't explain it well.

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lyrics are nice... feelin this. flow is nice. nice choice of beat. verse is the best in my opinion... lovin this... chorus is nice. i like this. verse 2 is persistant. goes nice with verse 1. good shit = ).

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Thank you Nos...This feedback has helped me more than you know. I have a basis to improve upon now. Thank you.


Blackmage. I feel you bro. I do that in many of my tracks. It's a BIGGIE technique. BUt, I guess I go overboard with it. LOL I'll use it only ONCE in a while from now on.


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returning the favor...sorry it took so long duuude...

listening...im liking the beat....u come in pretty nice....flow is pretty nice....some of the lyrics im not feeling....but some are ok....you should def. get that new setup asap...cause as im sure you know...it takes away a lot from the tracks....hook is ehhh...dunno..not something id be singing in an hour...im liking your 2nd verse a lot better than 1st....lyrically and flow wise.....

i think if this was done in high quality..youd prolly get a lot of downloads n shit...not bad...keep it up..

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not really much else i can say that hasn't already been said. i'd just be repeating everyone else. the track was ill. but u really do need to hurry n get that new setup, ya quality is takin ALOT away from your music

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