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Old 01-02-07, 03:31 PM   #16
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Originally Posted by Comedian
I dunno about in my verse, but we'll see Quotez in a casket

He doesn't know about his verse, but he'll see Quotez in a hearst.
...which means, "I'll be dead before you see quotes in his verse!"
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Old 01-02-07, 03:38 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by Comedian
i'll soak you in gasoline when bleeding your phase
then throw the match... giving a new meaning to Razed
watch this lame pretend that he got money, fame & friends
poor fuck... i'll smash the dollar sign in ya name to cents
you registered today, New to RV, but kid ya'll die
i'm a nice guy so i'll show you a round.... in ya eyes
^cause when my bullets go, running is foolish & shit
the only chants you got... is at your fucking funeral kid
look @ Faimez closer, what he wrote is some wackshit
I dunno about in my verse, but we'll see Quotez in a casket



You re not a rapper or comedian so ima just laugh at this actor
all of rv wants you to leave, the only time they say ''stay com'' is during natural disasters...
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Old 01-02-07, 03:57 PM   #18
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I'm bombing ya man, better off tossin' ya plans
Cause we ALL know I got Faime in the palm of my hand
Comedian the king of this, you can't duck my rule, dude
The only reason you a scholar is cause i fucking schooled you
& Rai$ed, not a chance! but don't doubt my keys
i just make it a rule not to battle bitches outside the league
just let up... i know you're shaky & nervous, but yo
you wanna Set-Up the battle,
it'd prolly never end - cause in your verses they don't
^the wording was off, but don't mess with it child
i was just experiment and testing your style
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Old 01-02-07, 04:13 PM   #19
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Comedian talking, but Raised called him out in a battle to rap shit
and you know what they say.... whackness recognizes whackness!
I am a scholar, all becasue Comedian taught me how typing works
thanks for schooling me... now I know how not to write a verse!
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Old 01-02-07, 04:30 PM   #20
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fuckouttahere with played shit, i done bucked this nerd
i dunno what suffers more from ya flips: your stomach or verse
look, my punches are flowable, and dawg, you're not
we all see your shit is stretched despite the smaller font
you've no clout... so it's easy to damange ya writtens
and i'll take your vocal cords & strangle you with 'em
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Old 01-02-07, 04:47 PM   #21
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So what I use a different font than you, I'm still invincible
and I insist you use a different font... called "invisible"
You gotta be new, looks like ya never dropped punches before
cuz yours are so whack... I can't even call em punches no more!
Wording is off, shitty concepts.. everything you drop needs work.
I haven't seen this many flaws... since Raised dropped a verse!
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Old 01-02-07, 04:57 PM   #22
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you can't weather my reps, don't even doubt it dude
you're tryna hold W's & i'll knock the win(d) outta you
ya feeding reminds me of pharmacies, you ain't preparin'
cause all of your counters are coming with generics
forfeit ya stuff kid, cause this whore is just rubbish
better off posting voting links
cause they connect more than ya punches
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Old 01-02-07, 05:26 PM   #23
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You defeating me, if your verse ain't from God, that's a never.
your whack punches couldn't do it....
and I don't think played wordplay'll do the job any better!
You'll get dissed when ya battle me, til ya missing some calories
piss on ya strategies, admit that ya getting ya style from me
Talk shit like ya bad as me, and shots'll hit ya dramatically
turn this bitch to a casualty, and add to the list of fatalities
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Old 01-02-07, 05:43 PM   #24
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you're a scholar,
so it's fitting you learn to seperate dope from nonsense
here's a tip: never focus on multies and forget about content
my shine is blinding, man whenever i'm rhyming facts
i'll beat you with one hand when my both arms are tied behind my back
sonning the weak, i just read the mag, i'm done with this geek
wow - congrats yo, you got the second wackest punch of the week
you've been torn & ripped before, but i'll rock him fair
DaTrus was scared to give your ass the boot cause it might get lost in there
you're a frail bitch, and no - your demeanor and scary kid
but Faime always hit the bench - cause that's where he lives
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Old 01-02-07, 11:03 PM   #25
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Yeah that's me, but I be rushing everytime I drop punches.
while you posted some of your top punches. .
....and didn't come close to the "Top Punches"
Your name only got mentioned from your cypher verses
which means, in ya weekly battles, they don't like ya verses!
What you type is worthless, so how are you dissing me?
when the only reason ya name got mentioned, was from sympathy.
But I'll admit, you get some good applause while being on stage
and the most applause you get, is when you're leaving the stage
And I thought the audience enjoyed your performance
til I watched ya show, and couldn't hear you.. over all the snorin'
You're pathetic, I'll drop you with sentences or statements
so the next place you'll see Comedian's face...
is imprinted in the pavement!
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Old 01-03-07, 12:00 PM   #26
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You may not like me but you will respect me,
I was Raised By Comedian's so his mama Apexs me,
I have a confession ya mama didnt call me but she was always textin me,
I spit Like Weezy Fuckin baby please beleive,Im Fabolous so I make hard fa you niggas to breath,and make ya faget how to say ya ABC's,
To the rest of you hatters you are now dismiss,Cuz I got so much green people think I stole Christmas.
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Old 01-03-07, 01:13 PM   #27
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how can noobs approach this when i flawless vets?
Black will take so many shots,
that alcohol poisoning is deemed the cause of death
i'll blast kid in the stomach, you're finished man
but word, he DO got guts... but they in his hands
i'll attack your cardio, too when i punch this fuck
if ya heart starts to murmur, then i'll shut it up
this pussy is in a poetry club, knowing C will blaze him
but when i snap YOUR fingers,... it ain't appreciation
try topicals, ya can''t battle - what you writing sucks
fuck a chorus,
my shit comes with hooks... kicks & any type of punch

read, study & learn.
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Old 01-03-07, 06:41 PM   #28
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Yo you's a Joke Im put you in yo place and I dont mean no horm,
Yo me bein Drunk you the one typin ya keys all wrong,
all yall bitches I seen ya thongs,
sorry to you females I aint leadin you on,
I see yall just attrached to the watch that freaze my arm,
While Im wit ya moms you greezin ya palms,
u ain't funny so you can just leave it alone,
Im hear and aint nobody takn my throne.
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Old 01-03-07, 08:27 PM   #29
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son you aint shit, even if you ride till ya die
only a black star in the crowd of 106'n park being shown live
i'll send a uppercutt that'll undefine any type of hit
it'll knock you so far in the atmopshere,
.......they say fuck a star thats a plant
fuck this.....you wanna bann me okay just try
when ya have to do the same to ya girl the way she dick rides
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Old 01-03-07, 08:46 PM   #30
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who is this cat tryin to go against the top gunners...//
his name black.. so its unlucky that u facin me...//
cuz now ull be one of the top runners...//
but the only thing rivald by ya feet...//
is ya mouth when u speak...//
im out looking for a win...//
while u simply out of ya league...//
dont ever try to come at the top playas of rv...//
u fucking wit a general now...//
i already got an army...//
oill leave this assumptive emcee disrupted...//
a disorderly conductive...
abusive assault to ya fuckin mental construction...//
see i done tackled many men... wit my lyrical skills...//
so who da thought... that my tounge was already to kill...//
better lay still... cuz its hunting a meal...//
leave u on an ice rack... cuz its my nature to chill...//
my lyrics make ya stomache upset like ulcars...//
im verbally beating this kid till u see blacks planet fuck stars...//
im like a broken totem pole... dawg u could never top me...
hte way im making black fall.. mther nature should adopt me...//
i hit bitches constantly like enter on ya keyboard...//
an im blowing ya spot up like 400pounds of c-4...//
so forget a bodycast... homie try a bodybag...//
so if u wanna brag then ima pump the shotty fast...//
i paint lyrical masterpeices wit the slightest brush...//
leave u witout a leg to stand on then swipe ya crutch...//
so hears a word to from the wise... dont ever start shit wit me...//
cuz my lyrics leave u seeing more demons than constatine...//
im constantly... smoking these clowns like chronic...//
i got thug motivation... u just lazier than ebonix...//
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