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02-13-09, 12:44 PM | #16 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
I checked you posts dude, Your lines are all lame and generic
The dopest lyrics I saw you write are following Bobericc_ lol kinda clever, i thought this was aight your bad wording said, battling me made you less dope, now thats a fact you say I got mad played lines?..........Bobericc, your dog gone whack lmao yea clever flip off his bar from last week I had to do some research to get this vs. mad played nameplays! one way, got your jaw in a foul crunch trying so hard at tip, weak and get caught in an outter punch.. nah I wasnt feeling this and your rhyme scheme is shaky he aint texting it raw, wanted you to 'fill me in on your dopeness' and for sure, ..I fell through the emptiness with less than before! mmm you gotta work on your wording and you'll be killing shit, but this needs touching up man v/ one way he came way harder |
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02-14-09, 08:06 AM | #17 | ||||
What' it do?
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IP: 9FBF 8B23
5-2 one way comes back and takes the win 3-1
boberric loses 2-2
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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout
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