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Old 02-14-09, 06:59 PM   #1
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haha, I'm not french so i don't have a french accent

and yea... yea I said it

dont kill me
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Old 02-14-09, 07:01 PM   #2
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*kills you* lol
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Old 02-14-09, 07:01 PM   #3
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nnnnnooooooooooooooooooo
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Old 02-14-09, 07:02 PM   #4
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how dare u say that about my aj
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Old 02-14-09, 07:04 PM   #5
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hahahahaha poor poor AJ
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Old 02-14-09, 09:29 PM   #6
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hahahahaha poor poor AJ



Lmfao.. @ your scrawny ass still.

poor poor Josh
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Old 02-15-09, 02:59 AM   #7
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Lmfao.. @ your scrawny ass still.

poor poor Josh



You just fucking posted threads bout how you hated yourself and hated your life bro, and how adam was right and that you want everyone to call you a loser

you're fucking lame homie

and im in way better shape then your ass biotch, physically and mentally cuz you got issues
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Old 02-15-09, 03:01 AM   #8
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You just fucking posted threads bout how you hated yourself and hated your life bro, and how adam was right and that you want everyone to call you a loser

you're fucking lame homie

and im in way better shape then your ass biotch, physically and mentally cuz you got issues



hey you flaming faggot.

way better shape?!.....

ha! you havnt even seen me you fucking douche.

I can prove im bigger than your scrawny ass JTR.

and whats up with the Rat stache? LOL
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Old 02-16-09, 04:08 AM   #9
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and whats up with the Rat stache? LOL

I could ask you the same question, along with "WHAT THE FUCK is up with ya hair!?"



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hey you flaming faggot.

way better shape?!.....

ha! you havnt even seen me you fucking douche.

I can prove im bigger than your scrawny ass JTR.


Actually, I HAVE seen you bud.



Nice hair lmfao So lets compare your pic in your bathroom there to my pic in my bathroom here


Do you know who you're talking to? I work out 5 days a week, train in mixed martial arts, and i'm a marine. Fuck outta here you puny mortal
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Old 02-15-09, 03:01 AM   #10
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You're getting a lot better bro, props.
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You're getting a lot better bro, props.



not only do you talk to him like a faggot.

but your beginning to come out the closet too.
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You're getting a lot better bro, props.


I missed this, thanks a lot my man
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Old 02-15-09, 03:08 AM   #13
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Lol I was gon use this beat. Couldn't get a hook down tho.

but yea, i don't know hook seems out of place with the chorus switch on the beat. Delivery wasnt right for it.

First verse, lyrics were nice. Flow was on and off. Some parts nice, others a little off. Delivery tho too monotone. I don't think that kind of delivery fits this beat.

Second verse, lyrics coo here, but in end you def had way too many words per lines cuz you were rushing shit. And it just came out bad.

Third verse was better than 2nd, but not as good as first.

overall wasn't too bad. Better than your past shit tho.

word

and who the fuck is that kevin homo?
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Old 02-15-09, 03:34 AM   #14
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Haha you know how I do, Shadowville got some cool shit... but yea, I had the chorus pre-thought out before hearing the beat, I looked through so many beats I could beat hook too and this was best I could find cuz I got tired of lookin, and this beat was hot too. And yea end of my 2nd verse when im like "I hit a clear bong while all of my peers watch" I get the dubbs off so it makes the flow sound funky, and I do rush a bit. But word, this shit only 6th track ive done and its already drastically better then my old shit so im happy bout it even tho it aint amazing

And that kevin dude is wack, some lame ass nerdy asian from a goody two shoe private school, him and chrystal are friends and iunno somehow got into some stupid joke but faking a marraige as a joke and she figured it was harmless cuz dude is nerdy and no game, no racism but she isnt attracted to asian dudes cuz they aint her type and hes a geek anyways lol, but i told her it was buggin me so they breaking up their "engagement"
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Old 02-15-09, 10:06 AM   #15
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LOL all I remember is seeing "There's a party in my pants, and you know you're invited"

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