dont forget to mention that this is from almost 6 years ago with no mixing done on a computer mic with no headphones.damn your dumb.

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oh wow so after 6 years of overtime shifts you went from burger flipper to manager and finally bought youself a better mic and headphones, awesome!!

too bad I didnt even pay attention to how the mixing sounding... only to how wack your rhyme schemes and choppy flow are... you suck dawg...

"i've seen harder punches in kool-aid jars"

lmfao could you get anymore played?

honestly, like did you think that was original or something? did you miss the 50 million other times rappers have flipped this? Or did you think you were the first and it was a hot rhyme?

no seriously... what's the excuse for that.. i wanna hear it.. there has to be a reason why you thought that shit would be fresh.. please... let us know why?

it was 2003 you dick.it wasnt a played punch then.damn you get dumber and dumber.of course battle verses from 6 years ago would have old punches now.how can you be so dumb?i wish you lived close to me so i could beat the shit outta you.

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i'd cut your head off with my samurai sword....

and yea, I been hearing Big L use that fruit punch line lmao, so dont tell me it wasn't played, bitch

That's not played, just wack.

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^ lol yea it is but the concept in general of punch/fruit punch is played as fuck lol

and that was one of the worst wordings of that puch ive ever seen...

^name three people who said it or anything like it before 2004 you dick.you cant.YOUR played.corny ass suburban faggots who wanna pretend to be tough.certainly played.

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e-G's. certainly NOT played. better watch out jtr. lol

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Didn't you try to call yourself Ghetto Shakespeare at some point?

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better than anything you could ever spit, cuz you're an erogant bitch and he actually spits some true shit, and you're so blind u could never spit anything even parcially true

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i got a verse, i already wrote that would work well with this concept. i'd write it on here, but its over at my dudes place where i record. talkin about pyrimids and movin blocks wordplay type shit, joinin blocks like the pyrimid when they don't even know how they moved one type shit.
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i'm not tryin to hate, i'm tryin to spit as much trueth as i know. i only hate on bull shit

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i dont know, i'll have to tweak that verse a lot, that's not actually a rap it's a poem. After I wrote it I was like shit, I should record it to a beat. So I tried spitting it to a couple different ones and for the begining it would flow but towards the middle and end it'd go off beat so I need to re-write it make some bars longer or shorter so it can flow better

yeah, and the longer the verse the harder to keep on beat, but when u just go for it and try recording u end up gettin it to work. it takes a while, but u dont have to have it all in one take. fuck, imma go record right now, i got some verses and been downloadin beats all day. make that shit into a track and i'll wanna spit some real shit on it too.

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i got to plan my one last hoorah for tonight with the boys and girls before I take off