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Old 05-25-03, 10:14 PM   #1
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I dunno if this will make me look like an idiot cause I may be waaay off here


^lol, that is so cute.

Anyway..Varentao..The complexity of your pieces is overwhelming. It definately sets your work apart from others on here or anywhere else. Every single one, just so deep and rich in its content, its truly something.

Like has been said, no use of even trying to break down this piece for there are about 4387 things that could be related to it besides whats on the surface..Something that struck my eye was the phrase "bliss of innocence" at the beginning, and then the "irony grins at laughter" part at the end, which i thought were perfect start and ending points for everything said inbetween them.

You have a very unique writing style, no doubt about it.
Much respect.
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Old 05-26-03, 11:24 AM   #2
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appreciate it gege...very muchoso.....

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