what the fuck are you talkin about, i came up with my line off the top of my head

come on, can we get some votes??

HAHAHAHA KIDO's don't start whining......aight the ref is here..lol

Well Ama go fo whoever came the hardest.....

Vote goes to WAnnabe IVErson...lol Nice piece Kid
Koby is way better than Ive anyhow....

PS: Someone Vote on Me vs T-squere

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thanks for the vote whoever voted

god damn it, whoever voted on the poll, can you at least say why you voted that way??

yes please
i dont wanna be conceited but please shatter iversons ego

i just get pissed when people vote on the poll w/o explaining it, i dont care if i lose, i just want to see what i need to do to get better.

exactly
i want responses so i know wut im doin good at and wut im doin bad in
my bad for sayin your conceited and shit

yo dont worry about it. Anyway....votes

Vote - Iverson03. Overall I just liked your verse better. And as for whoever voted without saying why they voted the way they did, you have to remember that most people who vote here are mods. Most of us dont have time to be voting on all these battles, while maintaining the forums and living our lives. As for what you did wrong and getting advice, most of the people that are voting without using the poll are offering you those explinations. Anyway, decent battle.

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ok, i see what your saying, thanks for the vote.

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my fav lines from iverson

Only way ima stop murderin you is if the price is right like Bob Barker//
But if it aint, the scars you get from this battle will be permanent, like a sharpie marker//

fav line from billy

many stories like apartments begin startin when i disrespect you authority like cartmen/
to approach my presence forces the blood rush so quickly it'll make your heartspin/
on target like marksmen makin my point like a paper im markin/

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restart your lyrical program like computers and vacate my area like comuters/
accuse me of bitin rhymes but i dont, i chew em/
spit em back out and rearrange em so you can use em/

althought those wer tight lines, i think that those were ur only good lines no offense,

ima have to say iverson took this 1 in my opinion i just liked his ENTIRE verse better, none the less this was still a good battle,
keep elevatin kats

vote=iverson

thanks for the vote and good battle vs. me earlier. You had a nice rhyme goin vs. me. uppin 4 votes^^^^^^^