good punches, good imagery, good vocab, nice concept.

good work. keep posting, talent is short in here.

Thanx, Johnny, It's good too see a heavy weight finally caught it...a good rhyme is all that and attitude...I peeped your latest joint...I like your style, another one people just don't get.
Thanx, Scarface, I like your stuff also...but I haven't peeped (addictions) yet but I will.
Thanx, Dizzy, sometime I elevate too high for tha people, I had to come down on this one...and some still can't see it. I haven't had a chance to see your stuff but I like to know who's critiquin' to see if they are worthy of thier opinion...I can't just take critique from anybody...I was a heavy weight before I stepped in here. I'll peep you...ya'll keep flowin'.

I aint askin' for critiques no more....buuurpp!

yo you fuckin suck dawg you sound like a fuckin r and b ass bitch and you need to get taught a lesson come battle me and ill show you how it is done

I reckon ya shit is tight...I feel what ya saying...These dayz everyones got one vision not enough
site in dis whole meaning of life....Very deep and intense....Good word flows....

Congrats sending it your way...

Holla at mine...HATERS NUMBER 2 check my shit out...see if its ok