vote jay cuz he had better wordplay n better punches n better flow

Jays lines i liked

Mentill'z Illness iz Artificial, Hiz Skill Iz Unmentioned...
If Hiz Intelligence iz Perfection, Why Iz It Alwayz Questioned?...
Mentill'z Flow Getz Him No Where Like High School Drop Outz...
He Getz Ignored Like Closed Threadz, Alwayz Gettin Blocked Out...

MeNTiLLs Lines

Ya brainless, I'll leave U nameless, Next time think b4 U act
This kid aint got tha balls to not cum wack, He should be a Reservior Cat

yo this was close, both of uz were good mentill had mo punches but that was only near the end but i have to give my vote to Jay cuse his rhymes had mo meanin

i vote jay, becuz i felt his punches was well put together, and
thought out,
mentill had sum coo lines also,
coo battle, good luck neck week

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Jay... verse was blah... there were roughly 3 hard punches and the rest were blah...


Ment... You honestly could have had this if you had taken the time to let your lines flow into one another... there was no carisma... nothing to keep readers wanting to read... Jay beat you on that solely...




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