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Old 04-02-03, 03:08 PM   #16
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3 - 0 KO Quik-$pit

Win = Quik-$pit

Pz
 
Old 04-02-03, 03:10 PM   #17
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Real Insight/FeedBack...

Doe...You Started Of Aight ...Flow Was On Point...Felt The Aggression...TS Felt As Though You Were Going To Finish Em...Then Towards The End...It Wondered Off SomeWhere...Ya Personals Were Direct And To The Point...Was Feeling The D.J. Joint...Kinda Funny...It Was Simple...But Direct And To The Point...

Spitz...Your Verse Was Average...Nothing Really Stood Out To TS...Your Seemed Kinda Simple Also At Times...I Know You Live By Ya Name And All...But TS Is Saying Just Put A Lil MNore Thought In Ya Shit And You Prolly Would Be Alot Betta...Just Advice...

Vote=Jd...OverAll Betta Verse...More Direct...
 
Old 04-02-03, 03:11 PM   #18
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quik won . . .


yo quik work on ur rhyme scheeme and keep the lines that rhyme an even number . . .

::: Yo i see you edited your shit but thats aight, your fuckin rhyme was shite//1
I couldn't drop me verse last night, i was too busy makin your bitxhes pussy less tight//2
now if you look through yer mouth you can see a bright light//3
i see a few lines in your rhyme where a fuckin big bite, don't do it again aight//4
or i'll verbally uppercut you with a left then a right, i'll knock you out so you see the night//5


::: your name is johndoe and thats what is gonna be on the tag on your toe//6
i think its time you let go coz you really thought i would no show//7
Well i've never done that i always flow, just so my ego can fuckin grow//8




^^^ the last line in both of these throw off the rhythm and the flow of the verse cause im expect one more line to rhyme with it but instead u went off to a different rhyme . . .


nah mean . . .

vote on my battle with Flex Havana after he drops . . . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36788 . . . pz.
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Old 04-02-03, 03:18 PM   #19
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Nice Feedback Mind Thanx Dawg..

TS you still hatin on me?????????????

Well Never mind i got tha 3 - 0 KO anyway...

Pz Dawgs
 
Old 04-02-03, 03:20 PM   #20
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TS'z Not Hatin...Just Givin Real FeedBack...
 
Old 04-02-03, 04:03 PM   #21
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why the fuck do u refer to urself in the 3rd person . . . ?
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Old 04-02-03, 04:09 PM   #22
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Me?????????
 
Old 04-02-03, 04:10 PM   #23
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no . . . "TS"
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Old 04-02-03, 04:19 PM   #24
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Itz Just SomeThing That TS Does...Why Not???...Why Be Like EveryBody Else...Why Not Stand Alone...TS Could Go On For Dayz...

Side Note...TS'z Intent Wasn't To Clog This Thread
 
Old 04-02-03, 05:08 PM   #25
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