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Old 04-08-03, 01:27 PM   #16
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good flow man, great beat, real grimy, nice hook and solid verses although the lyrics were a little blurred.

well worth the listen.
keep spitting.
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Old 04-08-03, 03:46 PM   #17
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thanks y'all
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Old 04-09-03, 06:40 PM   #18
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uppin
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Old 04-10-03, 09:57 PM   #19
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Flowsss Aightz..Slurrin Some Like It Said Before..Shizz Is Real Laid Back..Try Some More Energy...Lyrics And Scheme Are Real Basic..Iono Just Not Really Feelin It Keep At It..
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Old 04-11-03, 03:29 PM   #20
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thanks
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Old 04-12-03, 07:49 AM   #21
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Make your rhyme scheme more consistant the beat was alright this was alright but you gave like no emotion on this
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Old 04-12-03, 10:10 AM   #22
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iight man uppin
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Old 04-15-03, 08:51 PM   #23
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Damn.. couldnt listen to the whole thing.. i turned it off around 45
seconds. Ive never really felt you though.. this was pretty bad..

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Old 04-16-03, 12:26 PM   #24
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yea, i feel the same as Cise...what gets me is that u named ur song the same shit as the beat is called on Noviss's website...lmao...
atleast have an original title!haha

but back to the flow- there was none...i flipped this instrumental way better then you sorry to say...'n doubt u'll ever reach the level i took it, cuz u sounded madd corny...dont know, u have no flow so im not too interested in what ur saying...feel me? prolly not...
oUT...
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Old 04-16-03, 02:33 PM   #25
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beat was coo, DUDE U NEED TO PUT MORE HEART IN IT

not too bad for a 13 year old tho

monotone flow try n switch up ya style or MAYBE EXADURATE YA POWER LINES SO THEY STAND OUT MORE

ok tho
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watever netcees
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Old 04-16-03, 08:20 PM   #27
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who's the netcee? us or a person posting a rhyme that doesnt rhyme?
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Old 04-16-03, 08:40 PM   #28
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watever netcees

says the netcee to the kid who hasnt posted online in months.
Dawg, I spit in real life now, Ive battled my way to a semi local
reputation. (In real life) So shut your fucking mouth and learn
how to rap. And if you got a problem with me or something, dont
express it to me through this thread, just diss me if you think
im such a netcee. You use netcee like Im not on your level or
something?

Cise <<very high, but still meant everything i said.. or something
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Old 04-17-03, 03:49 AM   #29
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NETCEE?????? ur fuckin off ther BUDDY

kinda odd coming from someone WITH 1764 posts!!!! LMAO
man u been on this site for a year n shit....call me names but i think you personify your own ignorance in a statement like that

i was jus tryin tah throw u a fuckin clue
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Originally posted by Concise

says the netcee to the kid who hasnt posted online in months.
Dawg, I spit in real life now, Ive battled my way to a semi local
reputation. (In real life) So shut your fucking mouth and learn
how to rap. And if you got a problem with me or something, dont
express it to me through this thread, just diss me if you think
im such a netcee. You use netcee like Im not on your level or
something?

Cise <<very high, but still meant everything i said.. or something


okay...that's good...everyone battles off the net...i'm done with this netcee shit cuz what does it proove? how far does it get you? winning a grb tourny haha...anyone who spits on the net is a netcee.
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