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Old 04-09-03, 11:58 AM   #16
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3-1... Tek has 1 post... so Mic Check you're tellin me... that this kid signed up for Rbbl and replied to this thread... with... 1 post.? *shakes head* Even so at the time... there were only 3 votes... would have been 2-1... but dunny isn't in the league... I mean damn good break down... but he isn't in the league... Damned if I know where you get 2-2 from... sorry bro...



now... like I was sayin...


3-1..! OH WEE..!
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Old 04-09-03, 01:07 PM   #17
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Haha, Avalon your getting soned..
Avalon got this hands down,I can
sit here and quote shit from both.
But rather not. This is how it is..
From start to finish, Avalon came tuff.
Q, you fell off, And punches were
soso. Had the right idea..But it just
didnt work for you dogs. Aint trying
to play any of u's just calling it how i
see it..So there for. My vote goes to

Avalon!
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Old 04-09-03, 01:41 PM   #18
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i vote avalon i aint gonna qoute shit
he won because i liked his flow punches and i was feelin that verse
 
Old 04-09-03, 05:05 PM   #19
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Either quote or your votes don't count. Not bitching Avalon and I are cool but I mean come on. A Heavyweight title match should have quotes you know where I'm coming from ? And no where in the rules does it state that they have to be in the league. He had a nice break down. So voting stands 3-2 until the rules change or something. Nice shit though Avalon. If this can sway someone. . DON'T READ IT. This post is for Avalon

Score: 3-2 Avalon is up.
 
Old 04-09-03, 05:49 PM   #20
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^^^^As Long As They're An Active Member Who Breaks Their Vote Down, It's Coo.....
 
Old 04-09-03, 05:50 PM   #21
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lmao@if this can sway don't read it... that's my dog... Ok... well no biggie... I thought they had to be in the league to vote... so that's cool...
3-2...
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I Am Keystylez..

Read The Rules If It Doesnt Contain Quotes It Doesn't Count .
 
Old 04-09-03, 07:05 PM   #23
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y'all suck, check dis ill shiz out-
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Old 04-09-03, 07:12 PM   #24
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Ok now i have time to quote, Its as simple as this..

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...

^ Dope..

And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...

^I was felling that

I'm hostin vital scripts that corrode the hopes inside'a kids
..couldnt make a name for yourself.. so Av provided it...

^Dope and original

so when I thrash the commotion.. you'll take a nap in the ocean
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...

^Funny, not to hard hitting

you're history dunn.. it's the truth kid.. this victor is heartless
after thanks are given for replies submitted... Q'll no show quicker than Evolve did...

^ That was whatever

when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...

^ I lol with that one. Funny as hell

this ya twelfth match, so if you post then they're lines for nothin
..cuz I'll prove that ya wins in battle only come a dime a dozen...

^Original, like the way that was twisted

ya thought Shank sonned you.. nah.. Av'll herb you directly
if I'm a past thought.. watch ya memory serve you correctly...

^ The dopest line of this battle

so practice tactics.. I'm usin full force to slice this cunt
once I get this party started.. Av's pull cards 'n spikin the Punch...

^ Nice

fools'll get deaded when Professor Av is schoolin contestants
I'll make you play Russian roulette wit the bullets you sweated...

^ That was really dope

this duel is regressin.. you'll feel the rapture as gays disperse
you didnt say I was full of shit... until AFTER I ate ya verse...

^ Cool

Av is the realest with.. rhymes.. so expect me to kill this bitch
way I shut this dummy up you'll think Av's a ventriloquist...

^Wasnt feeling that, thought it couldve been said better

I'll fold-this-fuck & whoever said Him was nice as me
..& after I show-his-blood.. I'll make Hemocyte to see...

^ Haha, for those who didnt get it, Pay attention in school..lol

this guy's a jock.. face the tyrant & move in a state of violence
you & ya crew are nothin but mimes so I'mma break the silents...
showed this geek I'd blow his steez & wont show fatigue
your only chances of bein champ are in the poetry forum below the league...

The ending was just cool, Overall verse...Dope



Ok Q,

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//

^No, bad start

I came into this match expecting something but it's all the same
. . Merk Squad blows like a storm, but I'm Rocking You Like A Hurricane//

^Where are you going with that punch?
Another bad one

I see your hand on the bible but that really won't save-ya
. . And I'd say I'm a fan of your work man. . but I don't sport an Ava//

^That was cool, but still wasnt hard hitting

Smash this kid, until I use his vertebrae to eat my salad
. . Av was never in Superb, but it always fronts on Average//

^I wasnt feeling that one

I'm not a net thug but just wait until lead hits
. . Yea I guess that line was dope, at least until I read it//

^ Feeding off his verse, wack!

Avalon is ok but still I stand before him, Quo is tops
. . Cuz face it, this kid sucks like old ladies at truck stops//

^ Noooo

Kid I got this battle sealed just like you was ill-fated
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//

^ were is the punch.Dont make sense.

Lets play. . like your verse came and I'll give you a sneek peek
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//

^ Your trying to hard dogs

Avalon is quick to smell defeat and this verse was sent scented
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//

^ Ha, that was fucken pure dopeness!

Fuck a slam, I'll peel up the concrete to bash Avalon and his ghostwriter's faces
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//

^Dope beginning, but fell off a bit with the last line

What's next ? Aww. . we're just now at the appex
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//

^NOO

I'll be walking away from this battle. . after Avalon is in a hearse
. . This battle was as miss-matched as the lines I write in my verse//

^ was feeling that one a bit

Avalon is really putting his nose the grind, until I make it as smooth as slate
. . And lets pause for Avalon to gather his cents like a collection plate//

^ Nooo, Dogs were are you going with your shit??

Stomp this kid so hard I'll be pulling Avalon out of a hat
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//

^I think you still havent figured out what punchlines are

Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

^ Dope

Well this will only happen when its a Heavy weight match.
Will never do this shit again..

Overal Avalon verse was far better then Q's
I think most of these kids are getting confused
by Q's format. And i dont think everyone is
reading that whole shit.. Well there you have it folks

1ne..
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Old 04-09-03, 07:34 PM   #25
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Vote shouldn't count^^

The kid didn't even get my verse. And yes. . all my lines were punches. It's called personals. PLEASE IF YOU DON'T GET THE VERSE DON'T VOTE. That's all I'll say. So score stands

3-2 unless Avalon wants it to count. Fuck I don't really care. . just seemed like a bias vote to me. Plus he didn't get any of my personals.

And never once did I feed off his verse. Avalon can agree to that. It's called a punchline kid. Damn man. If you don't get the shit then don't vote. No bitching or beefing here Av. But yea. . people like that piss me off.

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Old 04-09-03, 08:25 PM   #26
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Stomp this kid so hard I'll be pulling Avalon out of a hat
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//
Hit ya like a heart attack kid, cause ya whack, and Quo left ya broken hearted
. . And fist ya momma for good measures, so I can end this where it started//

Nice quotient^^^^^^^ That was my fav. part of your verse.

Avalon:

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
And I find it quite funny how your attempting to face
..something too good for you to even compose a sentence against...

Just as ill, this battle is going to Qou, overall his verse was stronger throughout.

Good Job, u both worthy of heavywieght titles.

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Old 04-09-03, 09:59 PM   #27
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Q... kid broke it down... so... I'm cool with it... 4-3...
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Old 04-09-03, 10:45 PM   #28
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That's straight I guess. I'm not here to bitch just wanting a fair match cause this is gonna be down to the wire by the looks of it.

4-3 NEED MORE VOTES

(And please explain and if you don't get it don't bother. Both verses were packed with hidden metaphors and personals so if the punch doesn't makes sense. . then obviously you don't get it. Just my 2 cents.)
 
Old 04-09-03, 11:30 PM   #29
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Quote:
Originally posted by Avalon

Your chasing victory.. and it's playing hard to get
I'm tempted to end your career.. but it hasn't started yet...
but what's worse.. ya verse.. or the simple fact that you're postin...
you're history dunn.. it's the truth kid.. this victor is heartless
after thanks are given for replies submitted... Q'll no show quicker than Evolve did...
when I fucked ya moms I aint expect for my protection to break
..so when I scold you.. dont trip.. I'm just correctin mistakes...
I'll make you play Russian roulette wit the bullets you sweated...


AV: 8/10

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95% of it
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it was his best shit//
I see your hand on the bible but that really won't save-ya
Smash this kid, until I use his vertebrae to eat my salad
. . Cuz face it, this kid sucks like old ladies at truck stops//
. . And you can't see the truth like ya eyes were lacerated//
. . Cuz this kid just came out of the closet. . and it wasn't during Hide N Go Seek//
. . And he has no chance of going mainstream. . unless I drown him in it//
. . I've seen less stretched lines then me writing my name with ya braces//
. . Ava is easy to give it all up. . like I invited him for sex//
. . And lets pause for Avalon to gather his cents like a collection plate//
. . Cuz fuck the belt I ate you for fun, and you can quote me on that//

Quo: 9/10
 
Old 04-09-03, 11:44 PM   #30
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lol damn Triflin . . . you didnt have to quote the entire battle . . .



all u had to do was quote 2 lines lol
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