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Old 05-08-03, 12:37 AM   #1
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No DouBt.....Mic Is I.L.L.......Single WHite Man has To DO WIt siNgle White Female.......Remember In the Movie She Started TO dress Like That Chick And Even Act Like Her........IN the End She Wanted TO be HEr.....................1
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Old 05-08-03, 01:03 AM   #2
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Hm..........................................

this was defneitley a hot battle

13:
you had creative lines, but.... half your verse was open mic

some of the lines could have ben worded better:::

instead of:
'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck

use:

Submergin U In Water Wit One Thousand Volts Of Power Causin Ur Tongue To Touch The Back Of Ur Neck
'Amplifyin' The Cries Of Ur Beatin While Tappin For The Sounds Of This 'Mic Check'/


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put the real Punch! at the end
it makes it harder

Mik Check:

you still running good multi's, and came with stronger punches:::

Vote: Mic Check

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Check had more "dissing" in his verse although somewhat general (not personal)........




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Old 05-08-03, 11:36 AM   #3
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13 in yur last reply above unemceeable's what the hell are you talking about?....lol



oh and unemceeable howd u get that thing in yur sig with the arrow to see the members of merk and yur wins and not applicible losses?

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Old 05-08-03, 02:45 PM   #4
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Old 05-08-03, 06:37 PM   #5
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Old 05-08-03, 07:27 PM   #6
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This was a real close battle, I liked Mic Checks multi's and fthe flow was even on both parts. What edged 13th out was his punches, where as they both were creative, but 13th's was more personal. With calling him the Eminem clone and single white male and all that. 13'th lines a little more harder too.

it's was close but
vote= 13th Disciple
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Old 05-08-03, 07:29 PM   #7
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who doesnt call a white rapper eminem's clone....its simply put...PLAYED OUT
 
Old 05-08-03, 07:41 PM   #8
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Old 05-08-03, 08:06 PM   #9
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blah blah....i can count.......
 
Old 05-08-03, 08:09 PM   #10
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Mic Check got this
way better punchlines

VOTE=MiC ChEcK



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Old 05-08-03, 08:09 PM   #11
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Can U.......I ThouGHt U WEre 'Dyslexic'......I Mean U Mentioned That In Ur Battle................
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Old 05-08-03, 08:19 PM   #12
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shit.. wow.. this a tight battle... mad props to both of ya---
heres my judgement:
vocab: 13
disses: 13
punches: mic
multis: tie
creativity: tie
flow tie..

shit it was a hard battle to vote on.. i liked both but i have to go with 13th disciple---
so vote =13th

yo, props to Bribeone cuz he voted for the one he thought best, putting aside the beff there is between 13th and the Porductions...

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Old 05-08-03, 08:24 PM   #13
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both came correct but I think I gotta give it to Mic Check. 13th didn't heat up until the end so mic got more punches . . .
"fight me again; n find out I'm ready to drop a 'Holy Shit' rd like a 'constipated priest'//
1 punch will have ur lung expanding cease; I stole your heat like a confiscated piece//" . . . that line was tight.

VOTE=MIC CHECK
 
Old 05-08-03, 08:25 PM   #14
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4 13th Disciple
3 MIC Check
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Old 05-08-03, 09:27 PM   #15
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both verses wern't a dissapointment,they delivered,respedt to those mc's for a good battle,anyways i'm goin disviple as i felt he built up and jus sheded it
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