loool... i would vote for all yall but i CANT... sorry....

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Aight. FINALLY checkin in.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

Yo Persion.........
You don't even know what a playa is/
Your game sucks and just gives up dissinagra'in like Limp Bizkit/
You game so low jus like your record, a midget, or disabled dawg can get mo women/
Hey, I know I got 1 loss, but you got two/
Now when ya gon have 3, it gets irritating, jus like the screamin of DJ Clue/
Now this is jus a warm up, I got more punches ahead/
My punches gon make you so swollen/
It'll look like Trish Stratus's big titties clappin/
Yo rhymes are pretty tight, but lamer than a rabbit in a hat trick/
After I beat you, you wouldn't even wanna return to this savage/
Instead you decide to disguise yo self wit plastic/
Lookin as white as a maggot like that faggot Michael Jackson/
Now after this loss, to you and me, it's ironic/
You'll get so pissed off that you start gettin psychotic/
Start smokin the chronic, doin stupid things/
Start fittin in the category of the "ist" list/
Such as: Rapist, Sexicst, Murderist, and Racist/
Face it/
You'll looke so fucked up more than yo momma givin birth to triplets/
The chronic fucks you up even more you start losin pounds, height, shit even ounces/
So now dawg you more like a wannabe gettin play'd/
Cause right now your pout'n sayin:"Damn, I just got my 3rd loss from MC 808!"

Hey, I know I got 1 loss, but you got two/
Now when ya gon have 3, it gets irritating, jus like the screamin of DJ Clue/

This line had potential......but he didnt pull it off i thought......
MC 808 definetly stepped it up a lil since tha last few times i read his shit.......
his shit actually wasn't that bad this time.....he used more wordplay, metaphors n shit...... give em a couple mo weeks.....he'll be merkin newbs then....lol..... but i vote when tha otha dude drops....good shit so far from MC 808.....

vote when tha otha drops.....peace

by tha way.....so whos in tha polynesian connection now? Shooks gone........
he was the main man......no connection anymore? ah thats a damn shame....lol....

fuck u dis is not freepostin....they took two pages already n only one dude dropped.....Das freepostin.....muthafucka....lol

yo mc 808 some of that shit didnt rhyme man... swollen and clappin?

anywayz im bout to drop gimmee like 5 min and ill rip u blood

Yo man, it rhymes to me. It doesn't seem like it because it depends on how YOU say it. I mean, when I say it, it sounds like it rhymes. But obviously when you were readin it and shit, it didn't make sense. Hopefully this will make more sense: ahead, swollEN, titties clappEN. And come on dawg, it's like past 5 min. already. Drop yo verse so we can get the votes goin. Peace.

ill spit up wen u guys done here...........return favour wit me vs joshuadaniellain.................................. ..................

<<<<<<<<< yo man les go dawg we all know u pre-writin ur shit so jus drop already. got damn. serious les get this battle fuckin goin. by the way gags.

So now dawg you more like a wannabe gettin play'd/
Cause right now your pout'n sayin:"Damn, I just got my 3rd loss from MC 808!"

^^ i recognize that style...........lol..........forget it.........actually josh is right<<<(for the 1st time) u actually have gotten better and im actually impressed. keep it up

Yo MC 808, u tryin to win this battle, while everyone knows your third-rate/
you talk about smokin bomb like its somethin bad, that proves that doin homework is the most fun you've had/
yo ass could barely make a rhyme, some of those rhymes were retarded, matter of fact readin them was a damn waste of time/
u need to take some classes man, fo real tho, cuz you tryin to win a battle is like a black dude gettin a tan
its useless, matter of fact i dont kno why u do this, settin yoself up to get ripped, man u really clueless/
your verse is more annoyin than a repetitive car honk, i'd rather listen to missy elliot sayin "bedonk o donk donk"/
ima finish this shit right here right quick, cuz my punches hit harder than Jet-Li kick/
remember one thing, u dont fuck with the greatest, ill leave yo ass in a ditch, do it like robert de niro sayin "BADA BING"/
im comin straight at your rhymes, as wack as they may be, i could take yo ass in a battle even if i was high off PCP/
u need to get out of this battle before you get laughed at, you couldnt sell a record if ur beat was laced by battlecat/

n i wasnt pre-writin shit i was about to flow until i realized i was missin Spurs- Lakers which i had mad money on (luckily spurs won), so i came back n freestyled that shit, that verse was notin, i did it in about 3 min.

Good Job. LEt's go peeps. FINALLY, uppin fo votes.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

lets see what u got!
i´ll give my opinion!

please vote on my shit with Mody!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46551

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turn ya back on me, get clapped and lose ya legs...

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Yo MC 808, u tryin to win this battle, while everyone knows your third-rate/
you talk about smokin bomb like its somethin bad, that proves that doin homework is the most fun you've had/

^^^ this is an example of tryin to rap jus to rhyme things. both of u need elevation. it was good punches here and there. good match both. my vote goes to 808