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05-21-03, 06:25 PM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
Thanx Dawg
Uppin ! |
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05-21-03, 06:51 PM
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
Tight it was deep and had good flow which i really like in an open mic, feelin it really enjoyable and the fact that its true is good
Thanx man you jus' brightened up ma day.. -one love- |
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05-21-03, 06:53 PM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
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^ ^ ^ Deep Shit Dawg Thanx .. Uppin |
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05-22-03, 06:42 AM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
Uppin some feed back people
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05-22-03, 09:51 AM
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IP: DCAD 8491
haha dis shit i can relate to, this is so true like u read my own thoughts is this like your owb experience from the heart? flow n everythin was tight. give this a 9/10 dogg.
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05-22-03, 12:20 PM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
Yeh It Is An Experience than Hasn't Ended Yet An I Hope It Never Does!!
Uppin people ! ! ! |
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07-02-03, 04:59 PM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
Uppin this!!!!
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07-02-03, 05:47 PM
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Tampons are expensive
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IP: EF0A E7B2
Shiznit's Thoughts:
Its funny how love just spins you around and do all those crazy stuff huh? like you would do everything for love...i always thought that love doesnt exist...its just like a mere reflection of what we just WANT...but for some reason someone made me feel that its way way better than that...but thats not the point..i mean all im sayin is love is really powerful... *ahem* alright bout the piece... VOCABULARY >well written ....interesting use of words....i mean the littlest word that you put in this meant sooo much that it melts my heart...good job! FLOW >it fits perfectly ...i liked reading it...i actually read it a couple of times and it quite good to read... CONTENT >wow!...i feel the love...im really in that state right now...love themes are usually the good thoughts on how to make a piece like this...nice these lines reminded me of someone special..'my life' and when i read this...i was like...damn! "i'm never gonna stop loving her i'll do what i can now that i've found her i am a complete man" ^^endless, forever, infinity...nice! "i'd marry her now so she is here to stay and i love her more and more each day" ^^^now thats The Ending....i loved it OVER ALL >amazing!....very nice...deep ish! drop more!
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07-07-03, 03:28 PM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
^^^ Good feedback ...
thanx uppin this!!! |
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07-07-03, 03:42 PM
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IP: 5944 49F7
yo quik man wot i feel readin this is like what i feel when i hear eminem rap about his daughter, so much love and absolutely serious, good shit dawg
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07-13-03, 07:48 PM
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IP: 16F2 8A6E
Thanx man ... uppin this!!!
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07-14-03, 04:39 AM
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IP: CD9F DA9D
this was tight i like this
had emotion and true feeling put into it keep spittin shit likes this...... PE@ZE |
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